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A cleansing sun rises at the first light of Dawn. And a new day provides a clean slate to write on. You want to believe love outlasts eternity. And yet, you struggle with pangs of uncertainty. In dreams, love's a merging; two hearts sharing one soul. Yet, it's also known to levy a heavy toll. Though relationships form, love can be elusive. And its existence is somewhat inconclusive. More than an illusion; love can set your heart free. But unless you believe, it just ceases to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2018 8:46:00 PM
The power of belief! Love your closing stanza: "Love’s more than illusion it can set your heart free. Yet if you don't believe it just ceases to be." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/29/2015 7:16:00 PM
This feels like a song, I can almost hear the music!
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Date: 6/29/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Richard, as always I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 6/29/2015 1:37:00 PM
I dream of love often Emile. Why does it have to be so elusive?....A7....I need to do a lot of catching up. I was chasing the baseball around with my 12 year old for the past few weeks. Today starts the first day back to normalcy.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Tim, as always I appreciate both your input and your support. Emile.
Date: 6/29/2015 12:41:00 PM
Very true. Thank u for the wise words. Good day Emile.
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks Njeri, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/29/2015 12:39:00 PM
delicately woven with lines that soothe the soul.. ahhh , love well told, emile!.. huggs
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks Nette, as always I appreciate your input and support. Emile.

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