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Love's Dream

I desire to spread my wings, Soar over all the earth, Seeking out pain, misery, hurt and fear. Then descending as a dove, Bring Peace and Hope. And so stem the rising flood Of man's inhumanity to man.

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James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2010 10:42:00 AM

It would be a beautiful sight watching the dove absorb mans hate, and allow it to dicipate through it's soul >> James :)

Date: 11/11/2010 4:43:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem,I enjoyed it very much.Thank you for your comments,I agree we could learn more if we took a step back to doing things more simply.I've always liked the history behind the Indian culture.If you like the music there is a song you can find on youtube called "Return to Innocence" by Enigma I think you might like.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/7/2010 8:30:00 AM

If you can find a way to reverse man's inhumanity to man, you will have succeeded where so many have failed, Sylvia. I love the optimism and hope this poem inspires in readers. Motivates us all to try and make a difference. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/7/2010 4:07:00 AM

through the sweet lines i enjoy the beauty of the mind,friend.

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/6/2010 9:19:00 PM

wonderful words here my friend duncan

Kim Hilliker

Date: 11/6/2010 7:21:00 PM

A lovely notion, Sylvia! Excellent Free Verse.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/6/2010 6:46:00 PM

June, enjoyed reading your work today and thanks for commenting on my work!

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/6/2010 6:19:00 PM

Such a lovely message of hope, conveyed in this beautiful poem....if only we could heal the world, as a dove of peace....if only..... those two words are so powerful...if only....