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Uncle Sam is calling me away, and with you I cannot stay Our commitment of love and devotion Will keep us separated by an ocean. I will now see if my love is true, and if my heart Belongs to you!. You will see if your love can stand up to the hands of time Until I am back to make you mine. We will now know the true meaning of “the test of time “ Or see if our words were blind. If our vows can hold up while I am away. Then our marriage will come into play. I had practiced my marriage vows in my mind Which have been with me for a very long time. These were my marriage vows I wrote for you: “You have made all my dreams come true And my heart belongs to only you You ignited a little spark-, which consumed my entire heart And it grew into a forest fire And the flames cannot get much higher. “ If it is true that you feel what you say That I have taken your heart away, then We will plan our wedding day

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Date: 5/24/2014 7:29:00 PM
OH WOW! Louis this is absolutely beautiful. If love can stand the test of time. That means it's true love. It is sad that some promises are broken and gone with the wind. Sorry I have not been around I am still not well. Many blessings... Lucilla
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