Loves Door:

If one could see, the unseen dream,
Dreamt not by man, or any other being,
Then could one walk through the unseen door to?
Would the unseen dream then come true?
And dreamt by others that finally knew,
Hearing the music that no one blew,
Touching no substance, as they just pass through.
Moving in motions that make no waves,
Juggling emotions mastered in other ways.
And how far off would I be, if I said
This we will see,
All the above and more,
If we all move through
Loves door.
           /|\
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Excellent poem, Rick. This is my personal fav so far, and you got plenty for me to choose from. But the opening line sold me ... "if one could see the unseen dream ... Very mystic and original. Hats off to you on a most engaging poem. A free thinker's delight. Love your work and how your mind works. A true winning combo. Live long and prosper, mate. Much love always.
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Thanks RW, that means a lot to me /|\
Gupta Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:09 AM
A joy in reading your lines ... as the sun declines ...
Wolf Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Thanks
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