Deeana Valencia Poet Sonnet

Loves Deadly Spell

Together they live happily forever
in a life filled with sorrows and sadness
they will be together, always never
excluded from reality for life

Forever or never they live to cry,
away they will be gone with but a knife
the choice to live happily or to just die
A knife or life, forever or never

a quarrel, a death, leaving one alone
he lies on the ground, a knife in his heart
a plan, a scheme, its never to be known
She says to herself "we must never part"

Now two dead hearts lie, killed with the same knife
Why? Was it love or just a wast of life?

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Seren Roberts October 30, 2012 at 11:25 PM Whatever age its a great sonnet. Welll done. Seren Deeana Valencia October 31, 2012 at 12:50 AM Thank you, I appreciate the comment.

Deeana Valencia October 30, 2012 at 11:18 PM This was the first poem I ever wrote. When I was 14 yrs old, I was given an assignment to write a sonnet. 16 years later I still love poetry.