Love's Dance

Dance the tortuous path of love with me,
explore nuances of the different roads,
some snake upwards towards lofty thrills
others zigzagging downwards in despair.
Together though we can construe
a life exhilarating and true
as we wander together in wondrous ways 
enjoy the beauty of a laudable life,
build a base to face the storms of love,
and like a sparkling mountain stream
face all the currents that cross our life.
Let us find comfort in each other's arms,
when grief crosses our meandering paths,
for the stream winds and turns
and a new page of life pleasantly begins
Let us laugh together at our mistakes
for in laughter, we find strength
and ostracize despair from our love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Y. Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 12:02 PM
Hi Victor, This is a lovely love write. I enjoyed this very much:-) Alexis
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:14 PM
Wow! So lovely and inspiring my dear friend Victor. I love every line especially the great ending lines. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Wonderful Victor, love is a never ending dance of romance, quick or slow whatever the tempo… Belle
Daniel Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Awesome love poem, Victor:)
Fowler Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Another romantic write from you Victor. Love it!
Ricci Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 2:53 AM
Victor Victor Victor. This is extremely beautiful with such feeling that reaches the reader. I will leave it at that. Wonderful poetry as always Victor. Truly. Have a beautiful and peaceful day now and always. Love and Blessings now and always as well. (smile)
May Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Beautifully penned Victor, the road of love takes many turns...
Kitchin Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Victor, wonderfully romantic!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:17 PM
A lovely write. Loved your ending. "laughter" Be blessed as you write away..............
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 10:55 AM
Tortuous paths of love, when weathered through a lifetime, bring memories and joy. Be blessed, dear one!
Buehler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 10:11 PM
A captivating poem, that is a portrayal of genuine love. Beautifully titled. :)
Roper Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Very romantic feeling my friend , great write. Blessings
Volumes Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Can it be love dear Victor if it ostracizes despair ? Still I liked your poem.
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Victor you are very good and exercise your talent to keep us all in awe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 6:34 AM
- When love develops and becomes a secure base, one can face everything ... beautifully, Victor :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 5:48 AM
Much enjoyed the missives of this metaphoric poem, Victor. Truly inspirational write.
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 5:47 AM
In spite of all the upheaval and snakes cooperating to heal and assist one another, this is a great and helpful message. A verse that is consistently illuminating, inspiring, and cheerful.
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