Loves Cocoon

As you lay in love’s sweet cocoon,
let me feast on your nectar til’ noon.

Your sweetness is so very divine,
beloved, you taste like a rare wine.

The more that I drink, I need a refill,
I can bask here of my own free will.

On this day of love, please don't forget,
you're a fine treasure; I have no regret.






Contest: Valentine
Sponsor: Richard  Lamoureux
02/14/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Its sounds so inviting living in this ethereal cocoon, congrats on your win, beautiful thoughts penned. Thankyou Alexis
Carber Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Very sweet, Alexis, with a lovely natural rhyme-- congrats on your win!
Evans Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Nicely done, Alexis. Congtrats.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Thanks for adding to the Valentine mood. Congrats on your win in my contest.
Y. Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Hi Richard, You are most welcome.You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis
Pettit Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:45 PM
From that cocoon, I'm sure a beautiful butterfly will emerge.
Proxenos Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Lovely poem Alexis - mellow, subtle, yet so alluring and inviting. Hope your Valentine's day was really super! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Lovely, beautiful, your choice of words awesome Every line a gem. Take care Rama
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:33 AM
what a lovely romantic poem Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Buehler Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Such a romantic love poem in the spirit of Valentine's Day. Beautifully imagined, Alexis. :=)
Wolf Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Love the imagery, Alexis. That 'nectar til noon' sure sounds inviting to me! Here's to cocooning. Got to look for some cocooning opportunities in my life now. Thanks, gw
Downing  Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Cheer my friend, enjoy away :)
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:46 AM
- Oh ... so beautifully written ... happy Valentines Day, Alexis - We have both Valentine and Mother's Day today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Beautiful poem Alexis. Much joy to you my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Be careful my dearest, Alexis not to get...drunk with happiness! Excellent writing. Enjoy the day! Hugs xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:01 AM
You should enter this in my contest. I see you are also enjoying the Romance in the air. I hope you and your love have a perfect day together. Hugs Rick.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:47 AM
A Happy Valentine Day to you too. Don't get drunk on the nectar. ~~
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Lol! I will try not to get drunk. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Very romantic couplets Alexis, happy valentines day to you too. Tom
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:47 AM
Hi Tom, Thank you so much. Have a great:-) Alexis
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