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His words were lies before they were spoken, a regurgitation of excuses. And a precursor to love's betrayal, deceit covers his trail of abuses. In his alternative reality, the truth transforms into hyperbole. And he can't distinguish the difference, even though it's so evident to me. He says that he loves me, but that's not true, I don't even think he knows what love is. He treats me like some kind of prized trophy, as though I was a possession of his. But love should stretch beyond physical needs, to encompass not only words; but deeds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/3/2018 11:01:00 AM
Beautifully written. " hides emotional abuses" this line says alot. "they" are quite good at it. Unless you know the" lies before there spoken" Unfortunately we sometimes learn by a painful experience.
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Date: 10/3/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 9:06:00 AM
Well done, Emile. So many bad relationships out there!
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Date: 9/10/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/4/2018 1:13:00 PM
A wonderfully written sonnet Emile! The turn would stand alone as a poem on its own merit. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/4/2018 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Dean, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/3/2018 10:35:00 AM
'His words were lies before they were spoken...' an eye-catching line right at the very beginning, and my attention remained undivided throughout. Very well written... I hope that you find the right answers.
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Date: 9/3/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Lawrence, your friendly comments brought a ray of sunshine to my day my friend, Emile.

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