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Lover's Walk At Sunset

the flower strewn hills 

embrace the earth with garlands....

a bouquet of love



a bent willow tree

brushes against my earlobe...

whisper of a kiss



 lover's palette 

sunset of crimson...

is blood from mine own heart?



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Entry for PD's Contest: 2 Valentine Haiku/1 Questionku)

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/19/2013 8:54:00 PM well, my prediction did not come true but for me, it's a topper!! Congrats, Carrie. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/17/2013 12:42:00 PM wonderful write and win...congrats Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 2/16/2013 11:20:00 PM many congrats Carrie on your winning set of Haikus Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/16/2013 1:58:00 PM CARRIE, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA Login to Reply

... Gigno Date: 2/12/2013 7:53:00 PM !!! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/9/2013 5:30:00 AM This is a very beautiful poem by you Carrie.Love the imagery here. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/6/2013 2:45:00 PM Ahhh!!So descriptive and expressive..Romantic work that you have penned..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/4/2013 11:13:00 PM wow, I expect to see these high on the list. You did exactly what the judge requested!! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/4/2013 11:30:00 AM Just beautiful.What can one expect from such a beautiful heart? Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 2/2/2013 6:48:00 PM Gave me the goose bumps wit this one dear poet ! Loved it ! Nice to read you again ! Have a wonderful weekend Carrie....much love, james Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 2/1/2013 8:20:00 PM Very nice series..Enjoyed the read..BG Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 2/1/2013 8:00:00 PM This is such a wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendously gorgeous poem this evening! What a powerful Haiku and questionku! Just a note, questionku is supposed to be 4/5/6 syllable count! Great Work!! Login to Reply Carrie Richards Date: 2/1/2013 8:24:00 PM Thanks so much Russell!