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Lover's Return- Mr

The candle burns a twin flame Illuminating the violet space I placed it on the window sill It will be my lover's guide to me When the tides bring him in. The green, yellow, pink is spread I decorated my tower with flowers For his welcome, I grew a special one When my lover returns, I will offer him the rose inside my heart. 30th March 2023 Contest: The Rose inside my Heart contest Sponser: Mystic Rose Rose

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/2/2023 6:24:00 AM

An absolutely outstanding write, Akanksha ~ warmest congratulations on your win

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/2/2023 7:22:00 AM

Thanks so much!!

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/2/2023 6:18:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting! God bless you.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/2/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thank you dear Beata:)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/31/2023 5:14:00 PM

How precious that rose can be when it is settles deep inside your loving heart. You have made me proud. Congratulations on your winning poem, Blessings, from my heart to yours dear poet.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 3/31/2023 11:19:00 PM

Thank you SO much!! I had to think for long before writing this. Thank you for recognising my effort, my placement and for the contest~ Love