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Out on the porch for a little recess From life's daily chores, listen to raindrops Pitter-patter, musical sounds request From gentle breeze, which stirs windchimes non-stop Nature's orchestra plays as in hammock relaxed lay A novel to read or just nap away Afternoon quietly, what more pleasure Maybe do something risque Meet with lover, love away rainy day In deep caresses our love we'll measure The flame will burn higher as our desire Rises with each kiss and loving caress As the rain's rhythm sets mood, love's red fire Glows as love to each other we confess Romancing to rain's music dance and sway Raindrops, roses, love's desire only glows Lover so glad you could be companion to Maybe do something risque As on the love seat, inflamed we repose Not needing love potion our love to renew Lover so glad that I met you today Out on porch listening to rain's rhythm Stirring music in my soul fears allay Perfectly matched love's biorhythm There are now no fears or life's dismay Love come take me away to higher realm Come, stay, don't just wait life's rainy day to Maybe do something risque Hold, caress, don't wait 'til life overwhelms Love come stay please don't ever bid adieu Sponsor:Cyndi MacMillan Contest: An Ode To Small Comfort On a Rainy Afternoon

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Date: 4/24/2012 7:17:00 PM
Smile ˜ You know dear beautiful Sara, after viewing another of your precious hearts comments ˜ Smile, I thought to myself, come on baby girl, it ain't that bad, bring a bit of life into your words ˜ Then, I view something such as this out of the norm for yourself in regards unto your beauties verse and I think, there you go baby ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 4/24/2012 7:22:00 PM
...My Little China Girl *
Date: 4/19/2012 6:55:00 PM
Perfectly matched by love's biorhythm...nice lines, Sara. Congrats on this superb ode to a day of flirting with your lover in the rain...a nice message overall at the end too...you rock, lady! Wonderful write. Love ya, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/17/2012 7:05:00 PM
you did so well with your ode, Sara. Big congrats to you in this contest.
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Cyndi's "Ode To Small Comforts" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2012 1:18:00 AM
Fantastic and romantic piece,Sara.'Love come stay please don`t ever bid adieu'.I love this...Congratulations on your win in this lovely contest....Love O.A
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Date: 4/17/2012 12:32:00 AM
Congrats on this very 'risque' piece ;) I love it....Well done Sara...that's good hookie days from work too...lol big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:58:00 PM
Great romantic poem Sara. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:14:00 AM
lovely piece with a fantastic last line - i want to try an ode but keep putting it off, lol - it looks like fun. i forgot to say many congrats on your wins - glad i did as i realised i hadn't read this one
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:26:00 AM
just stopping by to say hello. Sorry I haven't had much time for Soup since joe got back from his last long drive. Bring on a NEW poem, Sara!!
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Date: 4/12/2012 10:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. Lovely poetry Sara.
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Date: 4/12/2012 8:00:00 AM
Risque? I want it to be normal. Everyday!
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Date: 4/11/2012 7:05:00 AM
Very nice work dear poetess.
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Date: 4/10/2012 9:26:00 AM
a very sweet and serene scene Sara.. I miss my porch in NJ but we have a whole ocean's view here in Italy.. lovely lines entice a day of comfort and enjoyment luv.. good luck.. hope u had a blessed holiday weekend..
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Date: 4/10/2012 6:39:00 AM
Lovely Ode Sara,sweet and romantic in the rain. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/9/2012 11:09:00 PM
I think you did a very nice job on this one for the Ode to a small comfort on a rainy afternoon. I can think of nothing sweeter to wish for!
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Date: 4/9/2012 9:33:00 PM
Sara, i love the sound of rain.. it builds in the comfort, down in my soul... Who is this love? I ask... God is one mysterious gift... good luck in the contest..always..pd
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Date: 4/9/2012 3:47:00 PM
Sounds lovely Sara, i hope you are well and happy...xo
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:35:00 AM
what a sweet melody this is, sara... the feel of rain can stir love's mood! winning laurels to you... did you mean "listening" on line 2 ,last stanza?... hugggs! :)
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Date: 4/9/2012 12:07:00 AM
Very moving.This i admire much.
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Date: 4/8/2012 8:39:00 PM
Lovely Sara.. A beautiful ode xx Hugs
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