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Lovers On a Rainy Day

Out on the porch for a little recess
From life's daily chores, listen to raindrops
Pitter-patter, musical sounds request
From gentle breeze, which stirs windchimes non-stop
Nature's orchestra plays as in hammock relaxed lay
A novel to read or just nap away
Afternoon quietly, what more pleasure
Maybe do something risque
Meet with lover, love away rainy day
In deep caresses our love we'll measure

The flame will burn higher as our desire
Rises with each kiss and loving caress
As the rain's rhythm sets mood, love's red fire
Glows as love to each other we confess
Romancing to rain's music dance and sway
Raindrops, roses, love's desire only glows
Lover so glad you could be companion to
Maybe do something risque
As on the love seat, inflamed we repose
Not needing love potion our love to renew

Lover so glad that I met you today
Out on porch listening to rain's rhythm
Stirring music in my soul fears allay
Perfectly matched love's biorhythm
There are now no fears or life's dismay
Love come take me away to higher realm
Come, stay, don't just wait life's rainy day to
Maybe do something risque
Hold, caress, don't wait 'til life overwhelms
Love come stay please don't ever bid adieu

Sponsor:Cyndi MacMillan
Contest: An Ode To Small Comfort On a Rainy Afternoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rhinem Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 7:17 PM
Smile ˜ You know dear beautiful Sara, after viewing another of your precious hearts comments ˜ Smile, I thought to myself, come on baby girl, it ain't that bad, bring a bit of life into your words ˜ Then, I view something such as this out of the norm for yourself in regards unto your beauties verse and I think, there you go baby ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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April 24, 2012 at 7:22 PM
...My Little China Girl *
Song Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 6:55 PM
Perfectly matched by love's biorhythm...nice lines, Sara. Congrats on this superb ode to a day of flirting with your lover in the rain...a nice message overall at the end too...you rock, lady! Wonderful write. Love ya, Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 7:05 PM
you did so well with your ode, Sara. Big congrats to you in this contest.
Brown Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Cyndi's "Ode To Small Comforts" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 1:18 AM
Fantastic and romantic piece,Sara.'Love come stay please don`t ever bid adieu'.I love this...Congratulations on your win in this lovely contest....Love O.A
Burch Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 12:32 AM
Congrats on this very 'risque' piece ;) I love it....Well done Sara...that's good hookie days from work too...lol big hugs,love deb
Johnson Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:58 PM
Great romantic poem Sara. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Horne Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:14 AM
lovely piece with a fantastic last line - i want to try an ode but keep putting it off, lol - it looks like fun. i forgot to say many congrats on your wins - glad i did as i realised i hadn't read this one
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 6:26 AM
just stopping by to say hello. Sorry I haven't had much time for Soup since joe got back from his last long drive. Bring on a NEW poem, Sara!!
Youngless Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 10:42 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. Lovely poetry Sara.
Dey Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Very nice work dear poetess.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 9:26 AM
a very sweet and serene scene Sara.. I miss my porch in NJ but we have a whole ocean's view here in Italy.. lovely lines entice a day of comfort and enjoyment luv.. good luck.. hope u had a blessed holiday weekend..
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Lovely Ode Sara,sweet and romantic in the rain. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:09 PM
I think you did a very nice job on this one for the Ode to a small comfort on a rainy afternoon. I can think of nothing sweeter to wish for!
A   Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 9:33 PM
Sara, i love the sound of rain.. it builds in the comfort, down in my soul... Who is this love? I ask... God is one mysterious gift... good luck in the contest..always..pd
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Sounds lovely Sara, i hope you are well and happy...xo
Onclaud Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 6:35 AM
what a sweet melody this is, sara... the feel of rain can stir love's mood! winning laurels to you... did you mean "listening" on line 2 ,last stanza?... hugggs! :)
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 12:07 AM
Very moving.This i admire much.
Edwards Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Lovely Sara.. A beautiful ode xx Hugs
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