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Lovers' Feast:

Passions burn in the depth of night, Lovers yearning to be entwined, Against the wind these birds own flight, A trail hidden it's hard to find. Emotions soar high out of sight, As love explodes in hearts so warm, They hold each other close and tight, Embraced they lay in loving form. This is how love can be for most, Ever daunting to say the least, But when it's found it's grandiose, So succulent thy lovers' feast. In their arms lie and be adored, And feel the fires as they once roared. (Eight syllables per line)

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Date: 1/16/2018 5:19:00 PM
absolutely stunning budgie - i struggle with a basic sonnet let alone with 8 syllables! Congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:00:00 PM
Charming. Congrats on your well deserved win, WW.
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Date: 1/9/2018 7:44:00 AM
lovely sonnet WW, congrats ;)-luloo
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:55:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet, White Wolf, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/8/2018 11:27:00 AM
Stunning picture and poem. Congrats!
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:03:00 AM
White Wolf, Congratulations on your win. HUGS ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/31/2017 3:25:00 PM
another win for this one, I see. Way to go, White Wolf!!
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White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 5:39:00 PM
Yes, and thank you, Andrea /|\ Enjoy your day
Date: 5/30/2017 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest, White Wolf! Truly, a "lovers' feast," and a beautiful, rhyming poem. Sandra
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White Wolf
Date: 5/30/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thank you once again, Sandra /|\
Date: 5/30/2017 8:55:00 AM
White Wolf, congratulations on your win with this romantic poem! Janice
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White Wolf
Date: 5/30/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Janice /|\
Date: 5/30/2017 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my rhyme battle contest, White Wolf! This was excellent :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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White Wolf
Date: 5/30/2017 7:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Juli /|\
Date: 5/18/2017 2:39:00 AM
Very romantic . its passionate to the core but its not obscene On nicely carried out flow is great.DO visit my page too..
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Date: 5/16/2017 7:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win, White Wolf.
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Date: 5/2/2017 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, absolutely excellent sonnet.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/2/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Roy /|\
Date: 4/29/2017 8:06:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, White Wolf. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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White Wolf
Date: 4/30/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra /|\
Date: 4/28/2017 8:50:00 PM
this is WONDERFUL. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/30/2017 4:10:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea /|\
Date: 4/28/2017 4:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, White Wolf.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/28/2017 6:39:00 PM
And to you too, Agnes, thank you /|\
Date: 1/9/2017 11:53:00 PM
Hey WW for me your poem conjures up the image of that famous sculpture of the lovers embrace or the kiss I am not sure but the resemblance is so strong.
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Date: 12/17/2016 10:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Rick. Makes me think of the Michael Franks song, "Eye of the Storm." Your pen is flowing the gold ink still. Love this poem. Many blessings to you, Rick.
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White Wolf
Date: 12/17/2016 10:35:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment RW! But I know who that gold pen belongs to! Haha! /|\
Date: 12/14/2016 3:00:00 PM
Well done Rick. A perfect painting of lovers' union.
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White Wolf
Date: 12/14/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks, Morgen /|\
Date: 12/14/2016 8:28:00 AM
I love writing in 8 syllables, 8/6, 10/8, 10/11, 10/12, 11, 12.. Each one brings its own unique challenge. This is a very well composed Quatrain my friend manages to pack so much in such few words! Great work!
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White Wolf
Date: 12/14/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Robert! I started out writing a sonnet but fell short! Haha.
Date: 12/13/2016 6:52:00 PM
I have to find this place...great poem Rick...a fav
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White Wolf
Date: 12/13/2016 6:55:00 PM
Haha, I'm sure you can, Tim, and thank you mate /|\
Date: 12/13/2016 12:33:00 PM
Excellent Rick. Beautifully worded and well put together. Love the phrase "Against the wind these birds own flight". It made me think of the eagles in their mating dance in the sky. Beautiful to behold. Great job. God Bless, JB
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White Wolf
Date: 12/13/2016 3:55:00 PM
Interesting! And thank you, Judy /|\
Date: 12/13/2016 9:07:00 AM
Very cool my friend, this was mesmerizingly beautiful. Just curious though, have you ever tried writing one with an odd number of syllables per line?
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White Wolf
Date: 12/13/2016 3:54:00 PM
Yes, I did one called 'Thou art' has 11 syllables! /|\
Date: 12/13/2016 7:37:00 AM
Very well composed ... Very nice ...
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White Wolf
Date: 12/13/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Probir /|\
Date: 12/13/2016 1:42:00 AM
Wonderful quatrain, and I agree on the 8 syllables, It makes for a great heartfelt poem. "So succulent the lover's feast". Man, LOVE that sentence :)
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White Wolf
Date: 12/13/2016 1:46:00 AM
Thanks, Darren! Your penguin rocks too Haha /|\
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