Estela Canama Poet Free verse

Lovely Garden

Lovely Garden 

In a place of beautiful views,
We were sitting down with a smile
While watching the glorious sunset
Giving us a feeling of bliss!

When a real love between us sprouted
Those flowers around us;
Scented with a real affection
Your guise is quite familiar!

In a lovely garden of lilies,
The sundry banters became colorful.
Life then is meaningful;
When I heard your golden voice

The promise of forever,
The only thing I could remember;
 My heart began to sing joyful melodies,
 And I hope it won't last

 Suddenly the environs,
 Turned serene and lonesome
 Someone beside me is gone
 Then, I realized it was but a dream!

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Janis Medders Tobechi February 19, 2020 at 6:09 AM What a lovely dream written in a lovely poem. Thanks for your comments. Janis Estela Canama February 23, 2020 at 1:01 AM Thank you, Janis for your inspiring words. God bless!

Elaine Perrin September 27, 2019 at 2:05 PM Such beautiful words :-) x Estela Canama October 4, 2019 at 12:40 AM Thanks so much, Elaine for reading and for your comment.

Faraz Ajmal June 25, 2019 at 4:53 PM Ahh, such a lovely poem this is showing the distinction between the real world and the dream world, who says only depressed people live in a dream world, every poet and even every normal person lives in a world of his/her own, where he is the creator of his own imaginations, however the only problem is that this world doesn't have any future, anyways I really enjoyed the imagery you put in this poem, good luck and have a really nice day Estela Canama June 28, 2019 at 1:10 AM Thanks a lot! You're such a wonderful person. You have a lot of bright ideas. Sometimes, dreams will be a reality. Try to jot down some of your dreams. And someday, you'll realize that some of your dreams did come true.

Charles Messina May 9, 2019 at 8:05 PM It may have been a dream, but you made it feel so real...Awesome poetry Estela. Keep writing...your poetry shines. Love & Hugs...Charlie Estela Canama May 11, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you very much, Charles for your inspiring words. God bless!

Constance La France April 1, 2019 at 8:50 AM Estela, your poem is so beautifully penned, I could feel the emotion and then, the sad twist at the end, well done ! Estela Canama April 4, 2019 at 6:39 AM Thank you very much, Dear Heart for your wonderful comment. God bless!