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Lovely Dancer

Lovely Dancer

Lonely dancer Song of life Dancing in the firelight Twirling as the music plays Feign and sway your night away
written 11.21.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Woods Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 5:59 PM
Lovely poem! Xo
Grasso Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, Crystol!
Swan Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 4:47 AM
It seems like double meanings here - Is there a person dancing (lovely, lonely), or does it seem as if life itself is dancing and singing in the flickers and transience of the flame. Is it real life or does it just feign life? Or is it both? The ambiguity makes me pause and enjoy the firelight. J :)
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July 6, 2025 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Jeannette! I love to read how another poet views my work. They always provide new insight, find meanings I never explored!... Fran
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November 21, 2016 at 12:48 PM
i will twirl along with you, francis...a lively write.. huggs!
Grasso Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 11:01 PM
And I with you! Thank you, nette.
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November 21, 2016 at 6:49 AM
(: Awesome poem! Simply awe-inspiring. Thanks for sharing, poet Francis -JWE I rate you a 7/7
Grasso Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Thank you, JW. ...Fran
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