Winter Wallace Poet Free verse

Love/End of Day

destiny...enchanted noon

the girl born of the flower
her face...comely

footsteps,walk my way

we are close aren't we?

i'll be the night for you...
won't you be my day the sun i wait for?


sanctuary...sheltered hearts in the last storm

one more kiss baby-come on god is watching

the crowds are gone...ghosts now

one more i love you baby-god is watching

i'll fade first...can't stand to see you hurtin'

destiny-empty,lonely,gloomy night

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Denis Joe February 19, 2009 at 1:14 AM I don't like the lack of grammar in this but the poem itself is great. The imagery that it raises confronts the reader with the idea of relationships, well. There is a fracturing to the narrative that gives the feel of a stop-and-start. this is a good technique as it reflects the hesitancy of the movement of the child in the narrative. It is certainly a pleasure to come across such attention to detail.