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Loved

She dared not fathom the word, I said, “Why abhor it?”, Those jaws spewed those five letters very swiftly, I felt sorry. She never ingested what it meant to be loved. Her heart was astray from the tempo as it turned to pain, She turned to me with disgust as it consumed Her frame, My eyes can now finally see that She was never loved. I filled Her ears with solace to ease Her shattered soul, She conceived clear drops that resemble discomfort, I was fooled into thinking She was always loved. I held sorrow and told it to expose itself toward me, It painted the blues and blacks that consumed the atmosphere, This is how it portrayed the idea of being “loved”. I held Her, comforted Her, kissed Her with tranquility, Her arms unlocked and summoned peace for healing, She said, “I didn’t know this is what it meant to feel loved.” Momo Lewis

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Date: 5/26/2016 1:35:00 PM
You are more than a best new poet. You are excellent, wonderful and mind jerking. What a lovely piece this is. Welcome to poetry soup dear colleague.
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:25:00 AM
MomO, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2016 6:01:00 AM
Hi momo, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 4/27/2016 9:01:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Momo. :)
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Date: 4/27/2016 6:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem, choose the form correctly. This is not Ghazal. Poetry soup has a good definition of Ghazal or any form of poetry.
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Momo Lewis
Date: 4/27/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thanks! I had a hardddd time.
Date: 4/27/2016 4:25:00 PM
Momo,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Momo Lewis
Date: 4/27/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank u!

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