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Lovebirds

'...how do I love thee, let me count the ways.' Shakespeare: Sonnet LX111 He stops to buy her roses and a card to mark their anniversary. Strolling absent-mindedly he crosses to the park and in his reveries he hears two songbirds singing sweetly in the trees, a melody that cheers his saddened soul. He hurries to the nursing home to greet his darling wife, the half that makes him whole. He cannot let a day go e'er he sees her smiling face, that smile of sweet contentment that illuminates their souls and redefines their state of grace. Living on their memories they chatter like the songbirds, their conversation bright. He tucks her in and wishes her goodnight, God bless, sleep tight, (don't let those bedbugs bite!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 1:16:00 AM
Keith, this is wonderful- a display of love and affection. May this be a good example among couples. What God has joined together let no man put asunder. Ernilando
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Date: 4/14/2009 10:07:00 PM
I love this, for it sounds like my boyfriend....sounds like something he would do.
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:29:00 AM
Very sweet
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Date: 4/9/2009 10:34:00 PM
I love the romantic quality in this beautiful poem, Keith. It says so much about elderly people who cannot bear to be apart, even when one is confined to a nursing home. My Dad was this way with my stepmother. Having read this poem and the one you wrote for your sons (Scruples) I see you have a great capacity for love. I admire you and your work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:22:00 PM
this is absolutely wonderful!...so sweet..lovely... jus lovely....It's jus great....liked it lotz lotz....love n smiles Maryam
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:08:00 PM
wonderful-charma
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:07:00 PM
What a poignant message of grace through longevity, Keith, with longing somehow growing with every passing day. There's no hint of pity here, nor should there be. I still have so much to learn about what really matters in life! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/9/2009 9:45:00 AM
Such a tender hearted poem, the love message that it sends, heart-breaking, sad and yet so meaningful. Well done....love, Carrie
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:58:00 AM
This is tender, Keith....love it. One might send this as a sympathy or loving card...beats hell out of what's on the market...much too good for what's on the market. Love daver
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:22:00 AM
aww how lovley, so sweet, its a great poem, my husband dotes on me in the way this poem reads, God bless you from diane
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:18:00 AM
A sweet account of love and devotion. Beautiful! So tender and touching. Very well done. Smiles from Lolita
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