Edward Ebbs Poet Acrostic

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Love You More

We started together hand and hand just you and I
Friends at first the two of us eventually found love
From day one there was just something about you
Within my heart at first I denied there was more
Never mixing words I knew what you stood for
With the I do’s I did not hold back, I gave you all
The evidence is a skip in my heart when I look at you
I value our friendship more than anything else we have
Watching you rescue animals I love who you have become

Edward J. Ebbs - August 7, 2015


Written for a Contest, " End Line Word "

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Kelly Deschler November 14, 2015 at 7:03 PM I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem once again, Edward. So nice to see it on the winner's list! Congratulations!

James Inman November 12, 2015 at 11:11 AM Edward, wonderful emotional poem.

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2015 at 5:23 AM Congrats on your end line poem landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those end lines impressive..Sara

Joyce Johnson November 8, 2015 at 7:42 PM True love truly acknowledged. Congratulations.

Sandra Haight November 7, 2015 at 1:40 PM Such a beautiful tribute to your dear wife, Ed. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra

Kp Nunez November 7, 2015 at 9:08 AM One can feel that your poem really speaks from the recesses of your heart. Beautiful. Congrats!

Neva Romaine November 5, 2015 at 3:30 PM Hey Edward, a hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the End Line contest! A really sweet tribute to your friend. Excellent. Be Blessed, Neva Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:21 AM Thank you Neva, that tribute to my friend is my wife. Quietly I thought I had everything figured out until I met her, actually she was there all along for years, but I did not see...she is my best friend in life.

Skat A November 5, 2015 at 12:18 PM Edward, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:21 AM Thanks SKAT :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule November 5, 2015 at 2:19 AM Edward Congs Brother Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:23 AM Thank you my Brother from another mother...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 4, 2015 at 11:18 PM Congrats on huge win Edwards with this superb write! Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:23 AM Thanks Doc :) smiles :)

Balveen Cheema November 4, 2015 at 12:21 PM So aring! Congrats Edward! Balveen Balveen Cheema November 4, 2015 at 12:22 PM So caring!!

Paul Callus November 4, 2015 at 12:10 PM Back with congratulations, Edward! Well done! // paul Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:24 AM Thank You Paul :)

Paul Callus August 24, 2015 at 11:22 AM Well done Edward! An end-line acrostic is never easy to write, but in my humble opinion you have managed it with flying colours. gl in the contest. // paul Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:26 AM Thanks Paula :)

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2015 at 10:59 AM what a sweet tribute this is for someone that I imagine is really good with animals! I really like how you did your end rhyme, and I think it's a crowd pleaser! Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:28 AM Andrea thank you...she is good with all creature except spiders and snakes for some reason :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire August 18, 2015 at 9:40 AM Dear Edward, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my contest. Superb Quill. I know I'm being Picky But if YOU could Format YOUR POEM As such: you and.........I eventually found.....Love something about......You denied there was......More (Etc. Etc.) Thank-YOU for listening LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Constance La France August 17, 2015 at 6:24 PM Ed, this is beautiful and romantic A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry Edward Ebbs November 6, 2015 at 7:28 AM Thanks Broken :)

Kelly Deschler August 15, 2015 at 12:28 AM This is an interesting form. I will have to give it a try... Such a heartfelt write, Ed. Beautifully penned! Edward Ebbs August 15, 2015 at 5:10 PM Thank you Kelly; this was my first try. I penned what I wanted to express on the right and then made the rest of it fit on the left. Give it a try, I know you can do this...have faith in you :)

Eve Roper August 14, 2015 at 11:57 AM I Love the the way you have composed this wonderful poem a 7 Hugs Eve Edward Ebbs August 14, 2015 at 8:22 PM Thank you Eve :)