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I lie here longing for you, till at last you are home.
Darling, your little lamb dressed naughtily in lace lies here languishing endlessly on satin sheets, with loosened locks spread upon a silken pillow case. I sail into a day-dream land where I think of what I miss: the ripple of your gentle laughter, the scintilla of your smile, which send me to a lavender and lilac scented place of soulful bliss. I imgaine your soft eyes, alluringly light blue, your lashes that lightly brush my blushing face, And your dulcet voice calling, “Let me make sweet love to you.” Mesmermized by magic, I’m revolving with delight, maddeningly loving you, I’m lilting. You’re my moon. In your illumination, I am floating in your light. Dreaming of your smooth lips moving marvelously on mine. Like licking the meringue on lemon pie, so succulent. My wine, my mint julip, the elixir I imbibe – you are sublime. Here I am , your little lamb, yet dressed so naughtily. Hurry, Darling, let me fall upon you and love you lusciously. March 30, 2018 Now for PD's 'Alliteration 004 (I prefer old poems)' Contest

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Date: 7/14/2018 6:01:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Andrea for your excellent win with your sensuous poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/14/2018 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Romantic poem of love. Well done!
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Date: 7/13/2018 3:17:00 PM
Ohhhhhhh congratulations! Great title as well.
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Date: 4/11/2018 12:07:00 PM
Ooooh Laaa Laaa. I feel a little voyeuristic reading this. I feel like I should have had to pay the price of a harlequin novel. :)
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:54:00 PM
How sweet, Andrea. A most deserving winning poem. Congrats.
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Date: 4/3/2018 7:52:00 AM
This is top notch in my books. Congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 4/2/2018 8:09:00 PM
Wow Andrea!! Great romantic write! Congrats on your win my friend :) ~Judy
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:38:00 PM
An impassioned poem Andrea, expressed with romantic imagery and lovely alliteration. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes..
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Date: 4/2/2018 1:01:00 PM
A lovely write Andrea..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:19:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:02:00 PM
Sweet dedication to your husband, nice use of alliteration Andrea.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:34:00 PM
Deliciously naughty. Great poem, Andrea.
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Date: 3/31/2018 2:32:00 PM
love this fun piece, my friend
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Date: 3/31/2018 11:54:00 AM
Like Easter bunnies? How could he resist??
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Date: 3/31/2018 11:53:00 AM
Alliteration woven as a silk scarf. The best of luck to you!
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Date: 3/31/2018 7:53:00 AM
Definitely luscious, Andrea! And the alliteration springs to the fore. In my eyes, a sure winner! ~ Wishing you a Happy Easter! // paul
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Date: 3/31/2018 7:34:00 AM
Words woven in rhyme and alliteration adorn your rendering..a well written, and well executed poem--a top win, Andrea!
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Date: 3/30/2018 10:20:00 PM
Love your title! Sweet read! This should do well, I'll be surprised if not at the top :) good luck! xomo
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Date: 3/30/2018 9:55:00 PM
Wow! Wonderful write, Andrea... Such a sweet and cute verse...Loved the title... Enjoyed it thoroughly... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 3/30/2018 9:52:00 PM
Great alliteration poem, Andrea. Luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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