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I lie here longing for you, till at last you are home.

Love You Lusciously

Darling, your little lamb dressed naughtily in lace lies here languishing endlessly on satin sheets, with loosened locks spread upon a silken pillow case. I sail into a day-dream land where I think of what I miss: the ripple of your gentle laughter, the scintilla of your smile, which send me to a lavender and lilac scented place of soulful bliss. I imgaine your soft eyes, alluringly light blue, your lashes that lightly brush my blushing face, And your dulcet voice calling, “Let me make sweet love to you.” Mesmermized by magic, I’m revolving with delight, maddeningly loving you, I’m lilting. You’re my moon. In your illumination, I am floating in your light. Dreaming of your smooth lips moving marvelously on mine. Like licking the meringue on lemon pie, so succulent. My wine, my mint julip, the elixir I imbibe – you are sublime. Here I am , your little lamb, yet dressed so naughtily. Hurry, Darling, let me fall upon you and love you lusciously. March 30, 2018 Now for PD's 'Alliteration 004 (I prefer old poems)' Contest
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Ashley Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Returning with congratulations Andrea for your excellent win with your sensuous poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gentry Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. Romantic poem of love. Well done!
Fisher Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Ohhhhhhh congratulations! Great title as well.
Johnson Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Ooooh Laaa Laaa. I feel a little voyeuristic reading this. I feel like I should have had to pay the price of a harlequin novel. :)
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:54 PM
How sweet, Andrea. A most deserving winning poem. Congrats.
George   Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:52 AM
This is top notch in my books. Congrats, Andrea.
S     Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Wow Andrea!! Great romantic write! Congrats on your win my friend :) ~Judy
Ashley Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:38 PM
An impassioned poem Andrea, expressed with romantic imagery and lovely alliteration. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes..
May Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:01 PM
A lovely write Andrea..Congrats on your win..
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:19 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Sweet dedication to your husband, nice use of alliteration Andrea.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
George   Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Deliciously naughty. Great poem, Andrea.
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 2:32 PM
love this fun piece, my friend
Murray Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Like Easter bunnies? How could he resist??
Sergi Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Alliteration woven as a silk scarf. The best of luck to you!
Callus Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Definitely luscious, Andrea! And the alliteration springs to the fore. In my eyes, a sure winner! ~ Wishing you a Happy Easter! // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Words woven in rhyme and alliteration adorn your rendering..a well written, and well executed poem--a top win, Andrea!
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March 30, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Love your title! Sweet read! This should do well, I'll be surprised if not at the top :) good luck! xomo
Kannan Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Wow! Wonderful write, Andrea... Such a sweet and cute verse...Loved the title... Enjoyed it thoroughly... Reads like a winner...
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 9:52 PM
Great alliteration poem, Andrea. Luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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