Suresh Iyer Poet Quatrain

Love You Forever

Can’t forget that day
We took 7 steps together
Seems like yesterday
Its 7 years, we are together

Can hear the sound of heartbeats
I felt for you that day
Can you hear the sound of my beats?
It remains the same this day

You are my sweetheart
You are like my mother
I love you out of choice
With you, I have no bother

You hold a special place in my life
Words cannot say my love O’ Dear
Seven more births by grace of God
Our love shall last forever



                                                            5-11-2010 is my 7th Wedding Day
                                                            This poem is to my love, my sweetheart

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2010 at 2:23 PM Congratulations on your win Suresh in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 7, 2010 at 8:09 AM Congrats Suresh on your big win in the love letters contest with this excvellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday with lots of luv..

Carolyn Devonshire November 7, 2010 at 8:05 AM I'm so glad you entered this poem, Suresh. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2010 at 7:44 AM CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN..SARA

John Freeman November 6, 2010 at 3:40 PM Congratulations Suresh on your worthy poem's placement in the top ten. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta November 6, 2010 at 3:15 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win, Suresh

Linda Witt-King November 5, 2010 at 8:10 AM This has a poignant grace, Suresh. Very tender. I've enjoyed reading it today and celebrate your 7th anniversary with you. May you continue to enjoy your marriage at least as long as Sara Kendrick...49 years!

Carolyn Devonshire November 3, 2010 at 7:49 AM Happy belated anniversary, Suresh! This would make a great entry for Audrey Carey's Sentimental Love Letters contest. Hope you will enter it! Thanks for sharing this delightful poem with us. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 3, 2010 at 7:04 AM Seven steps you took seven years ago. Wish you a happy married life and special wish on 5th Nov' is Deepawali in India, Suresh

Sara Kendrick November 3, 2010 at 3:37 AM Great declaration of your continued love for the other...I am glad that you shared this one with us here at soup..I have been married 48 years working on 49...It is not easy but with love one can work through the problems..Sara