Love with Wild Abandon

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Constance's 'Abandon' Contest * May 20, 2025

"Love is an untamed force. When we try to control it, it destroys us. When we try to imprison it, it enslaves us. When we try to understand it, it leaves us feeling lost and confused. — Paulo Coelho


When first I'd peered into his dark brooding eyes there was an undercurrent, fathoms deep pulling me in. A storm brewed inside of me and each time we met I submitted to my desires and he to his, without regret. To have denied it would have destroyed us. He was never mine for the taking but it was only for him that my heart ached. We shared a passion, unrestrained— untamed. We loved with wild abandon. There was lightning between us. Thunder roared in my head with each deepened kiss. I heard it in his breathless sighs— felt it when his fingertips danced across my skin. It was a serenade of lovers that we sang together as if each time was a renewal, an awakening of Spring. Time rushed in months—years spilled in an hourglass. The feast is still as sweet, the passion as strong. We'll not be deprived the love we savor with wild abandon nor the silent whispers to each other's hearts.

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Date: 5/26/2025 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. I like the first line of the last stanza that says years spilled in the hourglass. It does go a lot like that. Sara K
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Date: 5/24/2025 10:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest "Abandon", Lin :) - hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/24/2025 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats and all the hugs, Anne-Lise. Hugs and have a fun weekend.
Date: 5/24/2025 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Love with Wild Abandon" write. What a great picture to go with your write. Have a blessed weekend with your win.......
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Date: 5/24/2025 11:33:00 AM
Paula, you're such a wonderful supporter of poets here. Thank you for being such a giver.
Date: 5/21/2025 1:07:00 AM
Ah linnersz, this is absolutely beautiful and so heartfelt! You do write romance from a very sincere part of your soul and that reflects through your poems, the flow and the emotional impact of your poem is truly so very strong! And i love so many lines especially the cadence of your lines are truly so stunning! I must also highlight im a huge fan of paulo coelho. Iv read all his books and i love this quote by paulo coelho youv used here! Fits the poem theme, and your use of prompt is unique, passionate, romantic, soulfully moving and leaves a poetic impression! A fave this is! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/21/2025 2:27:00 AM
Sweet friend, your thoughts on my poetry always brings me a sense of accomplishment. For that, I humbly thank you. You've read all 40 lines and made me aware of the line limit, but I'll post it in its entirety soon. Coelho was a pleasant discovery for me, and I will definitely be reading more. Thank you for your well wishes, Ink.
Date: 5/20/2025 12:08:00 PM
- Awesome love, Lin :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/20/2025 12:35:00 PM
Thanks for finding this worthy of your comments, Anne-Lise. You are an awesome souper at making them. A look at the Community Builder's list shows just that!
Date: 5/20/2025 9:54:00 AM
aww so romantic Lin this is truly beautiful! hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2025 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. This one was twice as long, and then it was brought to my attention that there is a 20 line limit. I'll post it in full verse when the contest is over.
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