Beata Agustin Poet Senryu

Love Vows

heart vows* earnest love
blazing with faithfulness zeal---
now seeking pardon

*Psalm 65:1 Praise waiteth for thee, O God, in Sion: and unto thee shall the vow be performed. 

February 6, 2021
2nd place, "A Valentine's Senryu" Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 2/9/2021.

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Jan Allison February 12, 2021 at 4:57 PM lovely lines Beata, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper February 11, 2021 at 8:23 PM Beata, congratulations on your win. Eve

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2021 at 4:58 PM fantastic, Beata. Big congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen February 10, 2021 at 7:54 AM - Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler February 10, 2021 at 6:10 AM Lovely Beata! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Tania Kitchin February 10, 2021 at 3:15 AM Beata, congratulations on your top placement with your creative poem!