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Love Versus Lust

Love divine, sovereign in directive Smites lust, selfish midst carnal perspective… Though both can be passionately active True love along life-building objective Unmasks lust that’s grievously "afflictive". While love sublime works really effective Reaching-out: restorative, curative… Scheming lust is deceitfully protective In the guise of care, vainly productive For personal gain; oh, greedy motive. Love can turn to lust when it’s destructive Overwhelmed with own wants, so "exploitive"… Flawed by human nature’s mark: defective I beg for God’s great love* --- re-creative To vanquish lust’s force, sweetly seductive.
*Romans 5:5…The love of God is shed abroad in our hearts by the Holy Ghost which is given unto us. July 1, 2020 1st place, "COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(2) any theme any form" Poetry Contest; Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 9/3/2020.

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Date: 9/4/2020 6:31:00 PM
I really enjoyed this piece! I see that both of us placed first so congratulations on your win! I’m trying to get my work out there for people to enjoy. If I can enlighten one person’s day with my words then I have done my job.
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Date: 7/19/2020 9:31:00 AM
The verse beautiful Portrayal inimitable Yet lust may not be decimated Or for that matter sublimated Being an innate instinct Ferality prowling it’s precinct Consciousness shift within Is where transcendence begins Internalising attention In quietude of meditation Imbibing and assimilating Being and so becoming Love in fullness One with Oneness
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Date: 7/3/2020 5:45:00 AM
Your rhyming is impeccable, Beata.
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Date: 7/2/2020 5:40:00 PM
Very skillfully written, vividly descriptive of the differences in love and lust, Beata. Janice
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Date: 7/2/2020 1:56:00 PM
Nicely done, Beata! I think you gave this much thought!
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Date: 7/2/2020 5:15:00 AM
Beautiful, Beata. Also, congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. For some reason it won't let me comment on your poem. Blessings
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