Love True

love produces surrender
surrender demands its due
duty to obedience
obeying love true

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Eiken Laan

Date: 1/21/2011 5:03:00 AM

Deb, this is a beauty, love it.:)))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:50:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb. YOurs had a wonderful message.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 5:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.. a very clever and charming poem,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 4:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 1:55:00 PM

Beautiful Deb. Congratulations on your win.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/17/2011 10:58:00 AM

Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win Deb, wonderful Dodoitsu. As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/17/2011 10:53:00 AM

absolutely lovely, congrats on your win Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Deb, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 8:50:00 PM

Very nice Deb. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 7:10:00 PM

Always true, deb! Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 5:50:00 PM

BIG cheers for the big win, deb..:) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 5:49:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoyed every line and another top tenner tonight too for u ..with luv..