Love True

love produces surrender
surrender demands its due
duty to obedience
obeying love true

lovedodoitsu

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Eiken Laan

January 21, 2011 at 5:03 AM

Deb, this is a beauty, love it.:)))

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:50 PM

Congratulations, Deb. YOurs had a wonderful message.

Poet Destroyer A

January 17, 2011 at 5:51 PM

Congratulations on your win.. a very clever and charming poem,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 4:26 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 1:55 PM

Beautiful Deb. Congratulations on your win.

Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 10:58 AM

Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win Deb, wonderful Dodoitsu. As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts

January 17, 2011 at 10:53 AM

absolutely lovely, congrats on your win Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 8:40 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Deb, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 8:50 PM

Very nice Deb. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

January 16, 2011 at 7:10 PM

Always true, deb! Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

January 16, 2011 at 5:50 PM

BIG cheers for the big win, deb..:) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 16, 2011 at 5:49 PM

Congrats Deb on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoyed every line and another top tenner tonight too for u ..with luv..