Paul Callus Poet Free verse

Love Triangle At Glencoe

Blue sky; the purple hills recline;
                        brooks skip; tranquillity.
                     I can’t resist nature’s allure;
                             my muse joins in;
                           we three make love.

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                                (30 syllables)
 [Glencoe ~ a most lovely area of the Scottish Highlands]
                  Paul Callus ~ 10th January 2015
                          Contest: Somewhere
                        Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Sara Kendrick February 27, 2015 at 10:45 AM Enjoyed reading this one..I feel the spirit of the scene..Sara Paul Callus February 27, 2015 at 11:25 AM Pleased that you enjoyed, Sara. Thank you for a lovely visit. All the best. // paul

Debbie Guzzi January 18, 2015 at 12:10 PM One of my favorite places Scotland I've been in the countryside outside of Aberdeen & all the way up to the Isle of Sky. Light & Love Paul Callus January 18, 2015 at 12:24 PM I agree with you Debbie...Scotland is beautiful and the Highlands are enchanting. My wife's ancestors came from the Isle of Sky and from the Isle of Man (where our friend Jan lives). Love & peace // paul

Courtney Courtney January 17, 2015 at 9:38 PM Great poem Scottland is so beautiful, thanks for enlightening my day with your words Paul Callus January 18, 2015 at 8:44 AM Thank you for a lovely visit, Ruth. So glad my few words had a positive effect. Take care. // paul

Donna Jones January 16, 2015 at 8:21 AM Paul...this is perfect and I so enjoyed reading it this morning....a wonderful mind travel on this cold Jan day..:-) :-) Paul Callus January 16, 2015 at 10:57 AM Hi Donna! Lovely to see you here today! I'm pleased that I managed to set your imagination wandering. Thank you for the nice comments. hugs and smiles ///// paul

Charmaine Chircop January 12, 2015 at 5:21 AM I love the place you've taken us Paul.I visited Scotland twice and the highlands.One time on my honeymoon and another time on my birrhday.Glencoe is indeed magical.Thanks for the mesmerizing view through words. Paul Callus January 12, 2015 at 10:16 AM Glad you enjoyed this one, Charm. I know you too love travelling, and some places beg us to revisit them because of their beauty! // paul

James Fraser January 11, 2015 at 11:20 AM Glencoe is a beautiful place in many ways. Deep, dark, mystical in a way as with it's Glen Coe massacre 13th Feb 1692. It's well worth visiting if you haven't been there already. Good luck in the contest, James :) Paul Callus January 11, 2015 at 11:53 AM Hi James...thanks for the visit and informative comments. Last time I visited Scotland was 2 years ago; Stayed in Glasgow, went to Edinburgh, and enjoyed going around the Highlands (Glencoe included). I loved it. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 5:30 PM your last line is a bomb!!! :) i wanna join in with my muse..:) Happy Sunday Paul . :) Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 6:30 PM You're welcome Olive_eloi! but in that case I'll have to change the title .... a quadrilateral, maybe:)) Happy Sunday to you too; you woke up while I'm still on my way to sleep! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2015 at 5:18 PM wonderful little poem you created for Nette. I am really enjoying seeing all the poems her contest is inspiring! Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 6:37 PM last replies for the night....dead tired (1.36am here) Thank you for a lovely goodnight visit. happy dreams! // paul

Jan Allison January 10, 2015 at 3:20 PM love the imagery here Paul so calm and serene - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx its a 7 from me:-) Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 3:31 PM Thank you Jan. Had a good time in the Scottish Highlands when last visited two years ago. It's a paradise for people who love art...very inspiring! (had a rough week...but ended ok.) Hugs // paul

David Meade January 10, 2015 at 11:15 AM I love Scotland . . . and I found myself running on the hills as I read your poem. My daughter spent a semester at Edinburgh and was able to spend some time exploring . . . 7 Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 3:38 PM I agree with you David; Scotland is beautiful...some places even more so than others. Edinburgh is a lovely city. The Highlands wild and captivating. Thank you for the complimentary remarks. // paul

Casarah Nance January 10, 2015 at 10:36 AM GREAT!! I love this Paul :) awesome Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 3:28 PM I love your 'awesome' comment Casarah! You're one of a kind:) Thank you! // paul

Gary Bateman January 10, 2015 at 10:19 AM Paul, I enjoyed your write here very much!! Very succinctly and descriptively written. Best of Luck in Nette's Contest. A "7" too for a job very well done here!! Best Always, Gary Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 3:09 PM Thank you Gary, especially for the top rating and the complimentary remarks. Well done on your latest write, too! // paul

Donna Golden January 10, 2015 at 10:00 AM Lovely, Paul! Best of luck in the contest! Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 2:53 PM Thank you Donna. I read your winning poem the other day, and I was most impressed. Hope to see you around more often. Have a lovely weekend. // paul