love, the second time around

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Hiya :) - hugs

Wonderful writing, Hiya. Congrats

First Kimo, First placement win. Beautiful, Hiya,

Love that first line. Nice kimo, Hiya!

Hiya, back with hearty congratulations on your top win in the contest with this beautiful Kimo.

With your debut into Kimo, you have swept the stage...👏 'tiara of tears, weeping veiled stars'.... what powerful images! Your ingenuity works wonders. All the Best dear Hiya!💕

With your debut into Kimo, you have swept the stage...👏 'tiara of tears, weeping veiled stars'.... what powerful images! Your ingenuity works wonders. All the Best dear Hiya!💕

- Beautifully written, Hiya :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

just beautiful,

Creative one that you have penned here. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.

A tiara of tears is so fitting for the second time around, the dashed hopes and dreams of the first time around still (and forever) burdening the bride's happiness. Touche, Hiya! :) Gershon

First kimo but excellent and beautifully crafted my dear poet friend. I really love and enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for reading mine too. It's my first time to write kimo, as well. BEst wishes always dear. Hugs

I really like your first kimo. Very nicely done, Hiya

Your Kimo contribution has overwhelmed my soul with your deep love pages, what we thought of as forever, we fall for again I❤️Kimos & yours a first & best for a win, dear Hiya ;D Like& fav

Dear Hiya, your amazing Kimo poem beautifully captures the emotions of experiencing love for a second time. Its imagery, like the "tiara of tears" and "veiled stars," is both haunting and intriguing. The structure adds a unique rhythm that emphasizes the process of falling in love again. Its expressive language and unique style make it shine. Your poetic voice is just wonderful in any form!

This is such a beautiful offering, Hiya!! .. even more so considering it's your first attempt at writing a Kimo.....imagine what you'll come up with "the second time around"! The opening line is powerful, emotionally suggestive, and spiced with alliteration. It is like an actor's grand entrance on stage and prepares us for the rest of the 'show'.... that of falling in love again❤️‍🩹 Warm regards // paul

Very beautiful, Hiya; people were really created primarily for love. We make too much else out of ourselves.

👑 💎 💋 🧜‍♀️ 🧚 Keep writing And Shining

Awwn I am learning sweet soulful star poetess angelic ray, that love actually happens once ~ I am feeling it! Your kimo is stunning and unforgettable! I am in awe! I love " tiara of tears" and " Hina of heart" I have been wanting to write a kimo 🥹 hopefully will do sometime ~ hah! Yours is gorgeous and heart touching like always ~ Pleasure reading you I am not feeling too good tonight However I wanted to comment and let you know That i absolutely loved reading this Sending you light always This ones a fav

Hopeful and beautiful. Inspiring. :)

A beautifully wrought kimo—brief yet emotionally resonant. The tiara of tears and veiled stars create a delicate, luminous image of grief transformed by the courage to love again.❤️