Love the Lord - the Hotan Style
~Love The Lord~
(Hotan)
Love Lord with all heart
His presence feel day and night
Hear His message heed His call
He loves us
He's not far away
When we fall
He's right beside us
When troubled He hears our prayers
He lifts our spirits each day and night.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2013
March.18.2016
~Author's Notes:
The " Hotan " is a Japanese syllabic poem of nine unrhyming lines, the Hotan gets its name from it's syllabe pattern, being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).
Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2016
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