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Love That Never Was

My "heart" was wrapped up in him, In his "beautiful" mystery. I never quite knew his thoughts, And I think he liked it that way. There was always something hiding Behind those "green" eyes, Something I desperately wanted to uncover. His love was all play, and I fell for the game. He’d play with my "hair", Letting the long strands flow through his fingers. Each like a "thread" of gold, he’d say... He always knew what to say. His eyes were sparks behind "dark" eyelashes, And I always wanted them on me. I had a "fathomless" fascination with him, One I could never satisfy. That’s how it goes with your first love. My heart pounded at the sight of him, A thousand "birds", Flapping their wings in my chest. My heart still pounds like that sometimes, Leaving me "breathless" in the "silence" of the night, When I think about how much I once loved him. 3/5/20

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Date: 3/11/2020 3:20:00 AM
Congrats on your win Ava.. A sweet romantic first love poem..
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Ava Loch
Date: 3/11/2020 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Date: 3/10/2020 6:05:00 PM
Ava, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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Ava Loch
Date: 3/11/2020 10:56:00 AM
Thank you very much! Excellent prompt, thank you for making the contest. :)

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