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Love Storm

Sitting on the shore Couldn't see clearly no more The waves were crashing in And the rain was soaking me to the skin Saw a man in a wooden boat Sailing happily afloat The wind turned to a gale He had to pull in his sail. The storm was brewing in my mind The skies darkened, my eyes blind The waves kept pounding on the shore "She don't love you anymore" Wondered what went wrong With a love so strong I wish I could turn back time To when she was all mine Her tender love was so sweet That nobody will ever beat Knew I had to let go Made my mind blow The storm was brewing in my mind The skies darkened, my eyes blind The waves kept pounding on the shore "She don't love you anymore"

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Date: 12/23/2016 7:50:00 AM
Great writing showing such sadness and loss. The reader can feel it and good imagery. :)
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George Christos
Date: 1/13/2017 12:40:00 PM
thanks heidi

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