Love Storm

Sitting on the shore
Couldn't see clearly no more
The waves were crashing in
And the rain was soaking me to the skin

Saw a man in a wooden boat
Sailing happily afloat
The wind turned to a gale
He had to pull in his sail.

The storm was brewing in my mind
The skies darkened, my eyes blind
The waves kept pounding on the shore
"She don't love you anymore"

Wondered what went wrong
With a love so strong
I wish I could turn back time
To when she was all mine

Her tender love was so sweet
That nobody will ever beat
Knew I had to let go
Made my mind blow

The storm was brewing in my mind
The skies darkened, my eyes blind
The waves kept pounding on the shore
"She don't love you anymore"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sands Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Great writing showing such sadness and loss. The reader can feel it and good imagery. :)
Christos Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 12:40 PM
thanks heidi
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