Love Sparks

As their eyes met, 
sparks of love 
emitted
emotions swelled, 
passions surged

like a well 
full to the brim
a tear drop 
glistened 
in her eyes

cutting across 
the borders,
it slithered down 
her creamy cheek
as a freshly formed 
globule of dew.

cracking 
into zillion 
rays of light,
it created 
a zillion wavelets 
of joy

suddenly,	
she turned
into a forest aflame
he, 
a river in spate!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 8:07 AM
A "Wonderful" story/write. Love It. Have a wonderful/blessed day................
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:47 PM
This metaphoric write is totally enjoyable from beginning through to the end.
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 5:41 AM
I like this spark of love, Valsa, but especially the climax in the ending. Well done my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 5:02 AM
I wanted to send you a soup mail but you do have the icon. Victor
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November 30, 2021 at 2:55 AM
A poem full of emotions and imagery. Very pleasing.
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