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Love Sparks

As their eyes met, sparks of love emitted emotions swelled, passions surged like a well full to the brim a tear drop glistened in her eyes cutting across the borders, it slithered down her creamy cheek as a freshly formed globule of dew. cracking into zillion rays of light, it created a zillion wavelets of joy suddenly, she turned into a forest aflame he, a river in spate!

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Date: 12/11/2021 8:07:00 AM
A "Wonderful" story/write. Love It. Have a wonderful/blessed day................
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:47:00 PM
This metaphoric write is totally enjoyable from beginning through to the end.
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Date: 11/30/2021 5:41:00 AM
I like this spark of love, Valsa, but especially the climax in the ending. Well done my friend.
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Date: 11/30/2021 5:02:00 AM
I wanted to send you a soup mail but you do have the icon. Victor
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Date: 11/30/2021 2:55:00 AM
A poem full of emotions and imagery. Very pleasing.
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