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So much violence I have wittiness these last few weeks -- some right in my own neighborhood.

blood pouring forth . . . red yelling . . . hate r a d i a t i n g shooting, dying . . . why “A voice was heard in Ramah, wailing and loud lamentations . . . “ Jeremiah “. . . so much weeping! Such a burden of lamentation! I will not gloss over the terrible pain and sorrow that comes from vanity and anger, but neither will I forget the final word of resurrection. “ Eugene Petersen David Meade 01/21/2015 Live Generously

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Vincent Flannery

Date: 2/7/2015 8:02:00 AM

Very powerful, especially when I hear the name of Jeremiah, the weeping prophet. I believe He would be weeping for America today. For as did Israel, so have we drifted away. Oh may the blind see! Take care David and enjoy the weekend.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/2/2015 12:46:00 PM

David, what a powerful and short piece, interesting my friend, thanks for the sharing, and for your comments on my work, cheri

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2015 3:28:00 AM

A very poignant and well written piece David.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/30/2015 2:46:00 PM

sad beyond words Light & Love

Constance La France

Date: 1/30/2015 10:42:00 AM

David, your poem is very deep and thought provoking, I like the flow and the presentation very much and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Cona Adams

Date: 1/30/2015 8:06:00 AM

Yes. So discouraging, I seldom turn on the news. Recently, we have been watching "The Allman Report." It's almost impossible to find a news report that is not slanted, or distorted by opinion. I like the way you relate the hate and anger to scripture. Jeremiah was projecting forward to King Herod and the slaying of all male children under the age of two in Bethlehem, in an effort to kill the infant Jesus.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/30/2015 12:57:00 AM

A very powerful verse David. Seeing violence is very disheartening and stressful. That word...why... a touching piece. Hugs...Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2015 1:58:00 PM

yes, what you said below in your reply to me is the same thought that had occurred to ME!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/29/2015 1:10:00 PM

Wish we had all the answers David; this powerful write shows the ugly side of human nature...fortunately there is much good that makes up for it. #7 // paul

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/28/2015 7:29:00 PM

powerful pen david excellent piece pal

Daver Austin

Date: 1/27/2015 2:08:00 PM

Someone said it's all insanity. This I do believe. Thanks for visiting. Love, daver

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2015 2:05:00 PM

Your descriptive wording and use of sullen imagery brought it all to life with clarity and grace. Emile.

Meg Anderson

Date: 1/24/2015 6:14:00 PM

So sad and very descriptive! Good write.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/24/2015 7:30:00 AM

resurrection precedes love.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2015 5:18:00 PM

More sincere expressions of your compassion for humanity, David. Your catch phrase Live generously should also be Love generously.

David Meade
Date: 1/26/2015 2:46:00 PM

I love you comment -- with just one vowel change . . . if you are loving generously you must be living generously -- I am going to start using it . . . be on the look out dear Andrea.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/23/2015 2:31:00 PM

Why?..I often ask that question Dave..So much said in few lines Dave.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2015 1:02:00 PM

Powerful work..The world hasn't seen anything yet..I'm impressed with your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Thanks. for stopping by.. Sara

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/23/2015 11:08:00 AM

This is a powerful piece with spooky undertones, intense and very effective in it's meaning of verse, well done, cheri and thank you your comments on my poems also I apprieciate your feed back, cheri

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/23/2015 9:19:00 AM

Wow! Stunning...Intense...Powerful....Driven. Every word has an impact.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2015 2:26:00 PM

- Awesome with power, David !!! - Well done :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/22/2015 9:04:00 AM

The world should be placed in the hands of poets! This is a powerful declaration, "why" indeed.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/21/2015 1:33:00 PM

It paints a picture with words and makes you feel them...this is hard to accomplish and you done it well. Emile.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/21/2015 1:15:00 PM

A world of pain and sorrow cannot be glossed over. It can only be conquered with the greatest love...brilliant as always, David...hugs, Rhonda

Tim Smith

Date: 1/21/2015 11:55:00 AM

Great write David...I saw two teens get off the bus this morning and start a fight with each other. One pulled out a knife and attacked the other...luckily the police subdued them both within 5 minutes

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/21/2015 11:53:00 AM

David...we live in a crazy world. I'm sorry to know of your pain. I hope healing comes....