Love Song

Raindrops making music
Beating on the lovers` heads

Singing a melody of love
Soothing and sinking into their hearts

Wafting across the vastness of their chests
Making them vibrate with amazing cravings  

Their heads basking in the sunshine
Of the present and the future of togetherness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:02 AM
lovely poem Ndaba hugs 7
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Shadow.
Macfarlane Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Lovely write on love....may your own song beat forever strong. Hugs
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Thank you, Cecilia.
Muideen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:42 PM
I love this beautiful piece of yours. Excellence......A.M.
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Thank you, Afolabi.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Lovely!
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Richard.
Callus Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Beautiful and romantic poem, Ndaba! I truly enjoyed. #7 // paul
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Paul.
Horsman Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 11:06 AM
wonderful poetry, love th visual you create
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Harry.
Monyela Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 7:22 AM
I read a few of your poems Sibanda and gosh am I not impressed! You are such a great writer and this love song, is a song I'd love to sing over and over again! Great poem!
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Lebogang.
Onclaud Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 12:24 PM
enticed by this captivating melody of nature, nbada.. well done!.. huggs
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, Nette.
Lasarus Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 9:10 AM
I love this lovely love song :)
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Emilia.
Muideen Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 4:12 PM
What a stunning write, you painted this with vivid imagery, and wisely. Excellent.........7!..........A.M.
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Afolabi.
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 2:13 PM
- A lovely love poem, Ndaba (7) - You know ..... I write a lot about love myself :) - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sibanda Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:45 AM
Thank you, Anne.
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