Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

Love Scene

breathing in and out
the slow and fast ebb and flow
of love scene imparts
plethora of stars o’er beach
her long wet hair matted, loose

2/19/2020
Let the Pens Flow - Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Eve Roper February 25, 2020 at 10:24 PM Congratulations! Great image

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2020 at 12:32 PM - I breathe in this beautiful picture, Kim :) ... congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2020 at 12:40 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! Thank you!

Jenish Somadas February 25, 2020 at 9:57 AM Beautiful picture of love..Congrats on your placement Kim.. Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2020 at 12:44 PM Thank you, Jenish!

Michelle Faulkner February 23, 2020 at 11:28 AM Makes me think of that famous scene in 'From Here to Eternity' - steamy! Good luck in the contest, Kim- Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2020 at 4:01 PM Yes! So what I had in mind ;)

Caren Krutsinger February 22, 2020 at 10:46 PM This has a delightful beautifulness Kim. Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2020 at 4:00 PM Thank you, Caren!

Gershon Wolf February 19, 2020 at 7:56 PM Whoa! The flow sure was hot and heavy at the beach! ~ Gasping for breath Kim Rodrigues February 19, 2020 at 9:00 PM Sands flying and everything ;)