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Love Scene

breathing in and out the slow and fast ebb and flow of love scene imparts plethora of stars o’er beach her long wet hair matted, loose 2/19/2020 Let the Pens Flow - Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Date: 2/25/2020 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations! Great image
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Date: 2/25/2020 12:32:00 PM
- I breathe in this beautiful picture, Kim :) ... congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Thank you!
Date: 2/25/2020 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful picture of love..Congrats on your placement Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Jenish!
Date: 2/23/2020 11:28:00 AM
Makes me think of that famous scene in 'From Here to Eternity' - steamy! Good luck in the contest, Kim-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 4:01:00 PM
Yes! So what I had in mind ;)
Date: 2/22/2020 10:46:00 PM
This has a delightful beautifulness Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 2/19/2020 7:56:00 PM
Whoa! The flow sure was hot and heavy at the beach! ~ Gasping for breath
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2020 9:00:00 PM
Sands flying and everything ;)

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