Love Quiet Spell - Hiku 23

Written: June 26, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand

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lilac w h i s p e r s      f
                                     a
                                          l
                                               l



beneath the       h          of your      g                                               
                    u       s                  a        z  ~
                         h                          e 


      l
  o      v      casts its   s
      e                              o
                                           f
                                                t    s-p-e-l-l

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Date: 7/3/2025 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet on your first place win in Brian`s contest with a lovely smooth write on the spell cast by love. Wish you a day full of love.
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Date: 7/2/2025 2:40:00 PM
Congrats in Brian's contest
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Date: 7/2/2025 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations Sotto, Imaginative, lyrical, enchanting piece. Clever shape devices reinforce theme Howard
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Date: 6/29/2025 6:10:00 AM
Wonderful shape and apt use of words make this haiku truly outstanding. I can feel love casting its soft spell. A true sensual delight.... !
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Date: 6/28/2025 4:11:00 PM
I didn't see this one! Beautiful poem, Sotto.
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Date: 6/28/2025 10:09:00 AM
Sweet one, Sotto
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Date: 6/27/2025 7:16:00 AM
So artistic, a visual treat.
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Date: 6/26/2025 10:40:00 PM
Wow!! What an outstanding shaped haiku this is, dear Sotto, your creativity is really on its highest here and I adore the wordsmithery you've so beautifully layered! The shape which you've designed especially for "fall" and everything.. ahh, beyond enchanting... such tender and heartfelt emotions conveyed in a mesmerizing way. "lilac whispers fall ... beneath the hush of your gaze" just beyond gorgeous.. so much said within a few words! Definitely one of my favourites from you! Keep writing!
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