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Love Quiet Spell - Hiku 23

Written: June 26, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand ************** lilac w h i s p e r s f a l l beneath the h of your g u s a z ~ h e l o v casts its s e o f t s-p-e-l-l

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2025 7:16:00 AM

So artistic, a visual treat.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/26/2025 10:40:00 PM

Wow!! What an outstanding shaped haiku this is, dear Sotto, your creativity is really on its highest here and I adore the wordsmithery you've so beautifully layered! The shape which you've designed especially for "fall" and everything.. ahh, beyond enchanting... such tender and heartfelt emotions conveyed in a mesmerizing way. "lilac whispers fall ... beneath the hush of your gaze" just beyond gorgeous.. so much said within a few words! Definitely one of my favourites from you! Keep writing!