Love Passing By

When the crimson rose has faded
And our day at last is done;
In the forest dark and shaded
Blows the tempest, dims the sun.
When the night holds us together
Shall forgiveness mend the past
Will despair bring sunny weather 
And heal our hearts at last?

If we hide within the shadows
Will you stay here close to me;
Will we walk forgotten meadows
Or sail a foreign sea?
In vain the hour must reap
What we gathered in the sun;
And love's harvest now will weep
For the battle never won.

Within the world's disgrace
In the hour of Nevermore;
Will there be another race
To a far-off fabled shore?
We promised love tomorrow
We preen with pride today
Now pride and love will borrow
The tears of yesterday.

Our pride we now confess it
Is a sin that couldn't last;
Our passion if we kiss it
Is like a dream now passed.
While fragrance scents the garden
And the misty moon rides high;
The wind whispers a pardon
When love goes passing by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/17/2024 9:00:00 AM
A beautiful soft flowing poem with nice rhyme. Very well written.
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Date: 12/14/2022 8:47:00 AM
This is cute!
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Date: 6/3/2022 6:40:00 AM
So here you dear poet are.... At the top! A moving write, for which i know you....Congrats Elizabeth! much love, james
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Date: 4/7/2022 5:26:00 PM
you had my attention from the first step in and held me in rapture until the end....excellent execution, i need say no more
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Date: 6/10/2021 4:28:00 PM
A very touching, well written and emotive rhyme Elizabeth.
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful Poem Elizabeth, I love rhyme and you nailed it.
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Date: 12/9/2020 3:30:00 AM
It sings beautifully to me. Thanks.
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:08:00 PM
More beautiful than the first time I read it :)
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Date: 2/26/2020 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Elizabeth!
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Date: 2/25/2020 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful write Elizabeth.
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Date: 2/13/2020 5:28:00 PM
I love this! It’s beautifully written! I can certainly relate to this lovely poem.
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:58:00 PM
Enjoyed the visions. Very well written
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Date: 10/9/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thanks for this lovely poem.
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Date: 7/15/2019 12:24:00 AM
This is beautiful. Loved the read. Ann
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Date: 2/19/2019 9:28:00 AM
Hi Elizabeth, sure miss you and your exquisite poetic brilliance.
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Date: 2/8/2019 10:11:00 PM
Very well written!
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:49:00 PM
Love this poem, it is a story well written!
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Date: 7/28/2017 5:04:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 6/14/2017 6:28:00 AM
Extraordinary writing with a very classical feel.
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Date: 6/6/2017 6:58:00 PM
Elizabeth,I lkie the line And the misty moon rides high. Also The wind whispers a pardon. Also Our passion if we kiss it. I like all these lines. I like these lines.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2017 6:59:00 PM
I corrected myself at the last line.
Date: 5/30/2017 11:44:00 PM
I thought of you today and I hope you are well? Blessings my friend,Love, Connie
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Date: 5/9/2017 3:47:00 AM
Excellent write. Could almost feel the wind whisper past. Thank you for sharing your talent!
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Date: 4/10/2017 6:33:00 PM
Great work here.The imagery is just outstanding.kindly read my posts I've just joined.
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Date: 3/23/2017 5:22:00 PM
This was so Beautiful it gave me chills !!
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Date: 3/19/2017 9:04:00 AM
Simply beautiful!
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