Eileen Manassian Poet Blitz

Love Or Lust- a Blitz

a great mystery
a tale of love 
love is life
love is sweet
sweet fantasy
sweet kiss
kiss of death
kiss of fire
fire warm
fire is great
great dream
great expectations
expectations disappoint
expectations too high
high in the sky
high price to pay
pay your dues
pay back
back log
back to the start
start flirting
start to finish
finish the story
finish it off
off guard
off the wall
wall to wall
wall of shame
shame on you
shame and honor
honor in death
honor killing
killing me softly
killing for pleasure
pleasure to know
pleasure party
party animal
party queen
queen of hearts
queen of passion
passion to write
passion for fashion
fashion model
fashion experience
experience desire
experience lust
lust for you
lust to dominate
dominate...
YOU...

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Paul Callus July 30, 2014 at 3:48 PM Hi Eileen! I must admit that this Blitz business is all new to me, but you sure blitzed your way down to a winning ending! Very enjoyable. I'm tempted to have a go!! // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane July 29, 2014 at 12:31 PM Eileen, I refuse to choose between love or lust, I want both, after all lusting for the one you love keeps the fires burning....love this passionate write of yours. Hugs Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 2:52 PM Hey...you've been away for some time. So glad you came back to visit. Yes...LUST does have it's place. I can't negate that fact. Thanks for pointing that out. Hugs!!

Charmaine Chircop July 29, 2014 at 12:02 PM I started to write a blitz poem but stopped half through..then didn't get back.to it,But Hey girl you did take the blitz challenge on amazing heights of lust and the way it dominates with its soft pleasury tips : ).Lovely!! Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 2:53 PM Thanks, my sweet. Soft Pleasury tips...You are so amazing with the way you word things! Hugs

Robert Ludden July 29, 2014 at 11:53 AM ..........and you do. Robert Ludden July 29, 2014 at 4:32 PM of course! Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 2:54 PM Do I? Shall I respond in kind?

Painted Hunter July 29, 2014 at 9:43 AM Blitz..hmmm...interesting. My favorite line is "pleasure party" ...im gonna use that one on my wife! There's a street here called Pleasure Ave. I like to turn down it when she is in the truck with me. When she asks where we're going, I happily declare, "Im takin' you down Pleasure Avenue, and I intend to get lost, baby!" Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 10:19 AM Oh Caleb...Caleb...I hope your wife appreciates you! You are amazing! :) She better like to get lost on that Avenue with ya! How sweet!

Justin Bordner July 29, 2014 at 1:55 AM " Kiss of Death...Kiss of Fire " I love how you work this form. There is a ravishing continuity to your subconscious. J.A.B. Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 10:20 AM Thank you, Justin...Ravishing is one of my favorite words. :) I'd take kiss of fire over kiss of death....any day! Thanks for visiting.

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2014 at 5:07 PM Eileen. Of all these blitzes I have been reading, yours is one of my favorites! So full of passion, just like YOU. Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 10:21 AM THAT IS SUCH A COMPLIMENT, ANDREA! Honestly...MUSIC TO MY EARS. Hugs

Moein Jr July 28, 2014 at 3:14 PM "A great mystery is...to dominate you"I've never seen such harmonious piece before.This blitz is strangely wonderful,Enjoyed! Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 10:23 AM Strangely wonderful! I lovely that adverb and adjective together! Lovely, Moein. Thanks for visiting my work. I'm glad you liked it!

Ken Carroll July 28, 2014 at 1:03 PM A heartfelt stellar write Eileen! Eileen Manassian July 28, 2014 at 1:36 PM Stellar...an adjective that is music to my ears. Thanks, Ken.

J. R. Corbin July 28, 2014 at 12:56 PM I am always amazed when gifted poets display fascinating talent. you, my friend, are both gifted and fascinating. Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 10:23 AM Lovely adjectives that you have used to describe me, JR. I'm ever grateful!

Richard Lamoureux July 28, 2014 at 11:14 AM Have another look at mine, I have added a number of lines. Eileen Manassian July 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM Did...Lovely! :)

Richard Lamoureux July 28, 2014 at 11:04 AM Yes, I think this is a dominant performance Eileen. I was swept along your poetic path. Eileen Manassian July 28, 2014 at 11:05 AM :) I'm supremely glad to know that, Richard.....Thanks ever so much for visiting me!!! You bring me smiles.