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Love Or Lust

L ove you everyday O liver I want kisses more than I can say V iolet please stay E veryday we can play OR L ight from your smile U s aginst them down the aisle S tay for a while T wo of us can go a mile Date Written: 6/26/2020 Acrostic Rhyme

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/7/2020 8:52:00 PM

Well done Paula, I loved the combination of acrostic and symmetry. Dave well

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/8/2020 11:50:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and your kind words. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day......

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 3:29:00 PM

Simple yet profound muse Paula. Congratulations on your win! :) Much love

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2020 3:59:00 PM

Thank You, for your note, congratulations and kind words. I am honored to have a win. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 5:34:00 AM

I like it that you have given the reader not one acrostic, but two. Well played.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2020 10:40:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and kind words. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/26/2020 5:13:00 PM

Very pleasant acrostic! Paula! Pannagiota xxx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2020 10:57:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful weekend..........