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Love On the Wing

I write a song for you my dear My heart does long to have you near Will you be the star that lights my way Until it's too far for you to stay Let the moon sing in the velvet night Set love on your wing, meet me in flight Bite Size Poem no17 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/15/2020 2:29:00 PM

Loved the simplicity of your gorgeous emotions blended so beautifully in your verse Joseph. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)

James Inman

Date: 7/13/2020 7:19:00 PM

Very smooth flow and a beautiful message, Joseph.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 2:54:00 AM

Nicely done, Joseph, easily read via your format, and my compliments truly on your win, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 1:49:00 PM

sweet and lovely, Joseph. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/11/2020 8:26:00 AM

Hi Joseph. What lady wouldn't love to have such a song written just for her? I would. Congratulations for being honored.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/9/2020 12:41:00 PM

I think you did so very well incorporating all these words in such few lines, great poem Joseph. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Joseph May
Date: 7/11/2020 7:05:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer

Judy Ball

Date: 7/8/2020 10:04:00 PM

Very well done indeed. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Joseph May
Date: 7/11/2020 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Judy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/2/2020 12:34:00 PM

Terrific WOW - good luck Joseph a sure win! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Joseph May
Date: 7/11/2020 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/2/2020 9:30:00 AM

Great entry my friend...a winner in my court...best wishes Joseph...^WW^ :o)

Joseph May
Date: 7/11/2020 7:03:00 AM

Thank you Wingster

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2020 10:30:00 PM

VERY well done, Joseph and nicely presented with the bolded words!

Joseph May
Date: 7/2/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/1/2020 1:34:00 PM

"Set love on your wing meet me in flight" My favorite line in this beautiful poem of yours. This is so dreamy and romantic. Simply breathtaking. :) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 7/2/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/30/2020 3:48:00 PM

Brilliantly written and executed Joseph--looks so hard to keep the tone and flow with three rhymes.

Joseph May
Date: 6/30/2020 4:01:00 PM

Thanks Vijay, once I got the first 2 lines, it came together

Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2020 3:04:00 PM

you have written such a clever rhyming poem with the first and last words and internal rhyme too - a real challenge if you use this as a contest prompt in future!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 6/30/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I think Beth beat me to it..hugs