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Love On Solid Ground

On egg shells she walks Hoping one will not break For the head games will start She does not want to partake He jumps to wrong conclusions That are farthest from the truth He always assumes the worst She needs rational, not uncouth She's fighting a losing battle For he never sees her point She can't head off the fight Does he enjoy being out of joint She wants to walk on solid ground To no longer fear the cracks She deserves to live happily Not worrying about his attacks Finding the courage to walk away When the heart wants to remain If only he could change his ways Love her without causing any pain She would more than gladly stay Embrace living happily ever after But as important as true love is Equally vital is trust and laughter 06/09/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/21/2013 10:14:00 PM
Well said. Wonderful write. Love the last stanza.
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:20:00 AM
Cecilia, a wonderful win.........Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2013 5:37:00 PM
So very true! This is a beautiful poem with a great message! Very nicely done, Cecilia, I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments!
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Date: 9/16/2013 6:05:00 AM
congrats i see on this what is an amazing poem, so apt so profound...
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:40:00 PM
Congrats - Great job. Ralph
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work expressive and creative work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:38:00 AM
very powerful Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:57:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Cecilia
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:57:00 AM
Finding the courage to walk away....nice line and a beautiful poem.Congo for the win
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:24:00 PM
hope she's not fighting a losing battle...congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:09:00 PM
Hi Cecilia, Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:17:00 AM
- Love is like thin porcelain .... Beautiful poem, Cecilia !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 11:56:00 PM
this is very nice. I can see a lot of thought went into it, sweetie.
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Date: 9/10/2013 9:56:00 AM
Time to let him go....... But he does give you beautiful inspiration. Ha-ha... :o)
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:47:00 AM
This an awesome poem. Thanks for sharing. I will favor this one..... Lucilla
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Date: 9/8/2013 11:38:00 PM
I agree. Sometimes we can get caught up in love that we forget to smile. Good poem
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Date: 9/7/2013 7:13:00 AM
This is a very beautiful heartfelt write my dear friend Cecilia. I love it so much and enjoyed reading it today. You're really a great poet too. Thank you so much for sharing your precious gem and superb talent. I'll come back next time to read more ok. Thank you so much for everything and your precious time stopping on my poem. Have a great weekend! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/7/2013 3:49:00 AM
Oh....sweetie ...yes...Yes! I hear ya...Strong write full of truth....Sending hugs your way....
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