Love On Fire

LOVE ON FIRE

Desire dances on a pedestal of love.

An eclectic flair of hard wired emotions 

playing on a fiddle of gypsy strings 

creating tension with every note.  

hanging in the air waiting for a sound

so pure, so innocent, so delicate.

so perfectly  exquisite for the moment

that it is often remembered for a lifetime.

CAK  7-5-2013


 QUICK SYNOPIS
Love seems to be a main topic
of many that write for Poetry Soup.
It seems to linger on the outskirts of ones mind 
and whatever that means to the person
at the moment, it was a significant
part of their past.  
Good, bad or indifferent,
it is seldom forgotten. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/7/2016 10:01:00 PM
You showcased the intensity of that flame so well. Great write!
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Allan Koven
Date: 5/8/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Dineen. I love your name.
Date: 5/3/2016 11:11:00 AM
With me it seems just those few moments are hard, no, impossible to forget. your last two lines tell it all. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Allan Koven
Date: 5/3/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Daver.
Date: 9/23/2013 5:40:00 PM
this is so cool. And how you wrote it thinking of other love poems. I especially like the ending on this one.
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Allan Koven
Date: 9/23/2013 6:33:00 PM
Ah Andrea, you are so sweet to comment on many of my poems. Glad you can relate. Thank you. Allan
Date: 8/12/2013 9:41:00 PM
yes! we do remember few moments for a life time...love is the greatest joy, the infinite pain...lovely work my friend. I would love to read more love poems like this ! Cheers !
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Allan Koven
Date: 9/23/2013 6:35:00 PM
Red, you will find a variety of different ideas from among my writings. Thank you for visiting. Allan
Date: 8/7/2013 7:45:00 PM
Loving it!i enjoyed every line every word!very well done!and by the way L(OVE is a hot topic!lol
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Allan Koven
Date: 9/23/2013 6:37:00 PM
April, it surely is! Its good to have visit. Allan
Date: 7/25/2013 1:13:00 PM
Love is never forgotten and we all crave and look for it. Great poem... Betty
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Allan Koven
Date: 7/25/2013 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Betty. Love, sometimes explicit, sometime elusive, always provocative.
Date: 7/18/2013 7:28:00 AM
Awesome display of true words written here. Absolutely beautiful.
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Allan Koven
Date: 7/18/2013 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Pace. I can see you are a spiritual man.
Date: 7/15/2013 9:25:00 AM
Goood one sir
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:42:00 AM
So true....So true. You are very insightful. The world needs love. :o)
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Date: 7/12/2013 2:45:00 PM
yes, you can call them a collection of sounds. p.s. replied to your comment. .T.S.
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Date: 7/10/2013 7:39:00 PM
An eclectic flair of hard wired emotions...I love that line beautiful words beautiful poem:0) ty4sharing....cheriex
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Date: 7/7/2013 9:43:00 PM
Nice, romantic work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/7/2013 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful!! So true of 'true' passion and love.
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