Love on a Starry Night

starry sky above....
the ‘night queen’ perfumes the air 
as your arms wrap me~	
your warm breath falls on my neck.
wingless I fly like a bird


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Sotto Poet

August 16, 2025 at 7:53 AM

Finely crafted, dear Valsa, with a touch of grace in every line. The tanka blooms, a beauty rare, and the form below it stirs the heart. Wishing you good luck in the contest, may your weekend shine with light.