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Love of My Life

Twenty eight years and still when I wake It is my new day he always does make A cup of coffee he has set there for me He said this is the way it would always be He is such a wonderful responsible guy I will love him way past the day I die My husband he works so very hard A wonder his brain has not been charred He comes home midday for his lunch Big hugs he gives me mean so much He again arrives just in time for dinner His ways show me I cooked a winner Then it is off for his daily bicycle ride Keeping that body from getting wide Home again we take off to go fishing Hope to catch some we are wishing Sometimes we act so much like clowns Together we share our ups and downs Our children say we are in a second childhood We think it would be wonderful if we only could I am so happy this wonderful man is mine He knows this as I tell him so all the time He continues to tell me he loves me And that's the way it will always be Entry: P.D's "In The Mood" contest Written by: Carol Brown 4th Place Winner 12/21/2011 Entry: The Love of Your Life Contest Sponsor: Kristen Bruni Written: 11/04/2011 Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/2/2015 11:33:00 PM
HI CAROL, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/2/2015 1:55:00 PM
A beautiful poem full of marital love. I like this write a lot. Congrats on being featured this week....Sharon
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:05:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic , well done on your featured work
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Date: 5/22/2012 12:35:00 PM
what can I say nice poem well written and your man a lucky guy indeed david scottx
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Date: 1/23/2012 5:49:00 PM
Awww that's amazing. I hope to see this in my future. : ) love sammie
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Date: 1/10/2012 1:05:00 PM
Dear Carol, Thank you once again for your kind comment. I loved this poem - in your marriage, you have a little piece of heaven on earth. God bless, :) M
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Date: 12/24/2011 2:28:00 PM
greatness emerges from the great ones. congrats on your worthy win. warm regards from me, myself and I, adelaja.
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Date: 12/22/2011 4:18:00 PM
Carol, you are so lucky and blessed. You must cherish what you have. Such a beautiful poem, congratulations on your win. Season’s Greetings and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/22/2011 2:59:00 PM
Hey there Carol, congratulations on your win with this beauty ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/22/2011 10:30:00 AM
Awesome and very romantic,Carol.keep on loving him.you two are wonderful couples...Congrats on your win.....
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Date: 12/22/2011 5:56:00 AM
Thank you P.D. for the placement in your contest. Congrats to all the winners. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 3:30:00 PM
Always and forever ..... Beautiful Carol !!! OXOX Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:17:00 PM
AWESOME marriage you have, CArol. Gosh, I've been married ten years longer than you have! Of course you will make your loving marriage last forever!
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
Carol congrats on your HM, great poem, nothing wrong in acting like clowns.. many thanks for your comments..David
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congratulatios Carol they are lovely sentiments and long mey they last xx
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:34:00 AM
Thank you all for your comments and congrats. He is one very very special man. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Carol on your placement with this beautiful piece. Well done
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:35:00 AM
Carol - what a tribute to 'himself' - I wish I had written this for 'my fella' - it says it all! the very best to you - Liz
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Date: 11/5/2011 6:04:00 AM
Stay young at heart and keep sharing.
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Date: 11/4/2011 7:31:00 PM
You sound like recycled teenagers Carol. Your special guy sounds like a gem.
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Date: 11/4/2011 12:42:00 PM
Sweet..........sweet wonderful write. I am too so happy that you are with such wonderful man. Best of Luck in contest of Kristen Bruni's. Thanks...... bl
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Date: 11/4/2011 7:02:00 AM
That is wonderful. Tony
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:59:00 AM
Hey Carol your defining of love with your husband is sweet and impressive. May God keeps your relationship sweet and strong forever. love Ajit
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:50:00 AM
You have found perfect love Carol, Many in life never know this kind of love.
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:15:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem Carol I hope he appreciates it
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