Love of My Life (2)

The love of my life is like 
The color in my eyes,
The words i utter,
She is cool and tender 
The representative of my 
Mother.

The love of my life 
Is like blood in my veins 
When she is angry or absent,
I become soft as rain  water.
Like magnet clinging to her is where i love to be,
To sing for her loves pleasant melodies
Like remedies of broken promises.

The love my life is like the rain to my soul,
Making me soft like soil and tall
Like a flourishing tree.
She is ever to install, the happiness over all
On the table of romance that
Can't be hiding even from far distance,
For instance, if she runs away from me,
I shall be down like a falling star....
Ever to remember, the first encounter.
We shall not be put asunder 
For she is the symbol of a true lover.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/2/2011 8:56:00 PM
Beautiful Charles!!!!!!! I cant stop reading your poetry, !!!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:01:00 AM
The love of your life must be very special. .wönderful tribute!
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:31:00 AM
These two poems show what you would like in a partner for life and what she would mean to you. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/2/2010 9:53:00 AM
the form is proper, just great
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