Love of a Puppy

I NURSE FROM MY MOTHER FOR 6 TO 8 WEEKS
A GOOD HOME FOR ME MY FAMILY WILL SEEK
I DEPEND ON MY NEW FAMILY TO CARE FOR ME
YOU WILL HAVE TO TRAIN ME SO ON YOUR FLOOR I DONT PEE
I NEED SHELTER FROM THE COLD AND HEAT
I PROMISE TO LOVE YOU AND TO LAY AT YOUR FEET
AS REQUIRED I HAVE TO BE FEED AND WATERED EACH DAY
THATS GIVES ME THE ENERGY I NEED TO PLAY 
JUST LIKE YOU A DOCTOR I NEED TO SEE
IT WILL KEEP ME HAPPY AND DISASE FREE
I LIKE TO GIVE KISSES AND NEED SOME BACK
AND MY LOVE FOR YOU I WILL NOT LACK
I MIGHT LIKE TO SLEEP AND SNUGGLE WITH YOU
ALL I ASK IN RETURN IS THAT YOU LOVE ME TOO
I CAN PROTECT YOU AND OUR HOME
BUT SOMETIMES I DONT LIKE TO BE LEFT ALONE
IF YOU COULD GIVE ME A BATH AND KEEP ME CLEANED UP
I COULD BE BEAUTIFUL AND POSSIBLY WIN YOU A GOLD CUP
SOMETIMES I MIGHT FOLLOW YOU WHEN YOU GO ON A WALK
BUT DONT YELL AT ME JUST GIVE ME A STERN TALK
I LIKE TOYS AND THINGS TO PLAY WITH
BUT WARNING ME CHEWING ON THINGS IS NOT A MYTH
I NEED EXERCISE AND SOMETIMES I JUST LIKE TO BE LAZY
YES IM ALOT LIKE YOU, I KNOW IT SOUNDS CRAZY
AND IF YOU LOVE ME I WILL BE YOUR BEST FRIEND
AND WILL BE BY YOUR SIDE TO THE VERY END
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/9/2011 10:55:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Tonyamarie. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:45:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too... good luck with luv...
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Date: 1/29/2011 9:01:00 PM
Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. What you have here is a diamond in the rough. Despite a few misspelled words and some faulty grammar, your poem is quite descriptive with some good rhyming included. I would like to see some more of your work in the near future.
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