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Love Notion

soft kiss lingers on
moistened and primed inner thoughts…
pulsing heart trembles

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Sensuous Senryu” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Francine Robert
July 26, 2011

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/10/2011 7:42:00 AM

Awww... very sweet :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 12:59:00 AM

so I see you got placed with this one NICELY done. It is very good, Caryl.

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/30/2011 3:41:00 AM

Congrats Caryl. So beautifully penned. Best wishes Em :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 2:44:00 AM

Dear Caryl, I expected to see this in the winners' circle. Congratulations, dear! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:03:00 PM

Congrats! Im so happy that you such a great win. BG

Date: 6/27/2011 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations Caryl on this lovely write in Francine's contest. Alexa

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2011 2:37:00 PM

Caryl, congratulations on your awesome win in Francine's contest ;) love you title!! love Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 1:56:00 PM

oohhh LOVE line three finely some sensory input!! [no need for capital "s" same rules as haiku no capitalization] and so "right" to include all this tactil info in a love verse! You go! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 1:26:00 PM

Congrats Caryl on your spectacular win with this sensuous senryu my friend.. perfect words luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 11:51:00 AM

My congratulations onthe win in the contest of francine, Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2011 10:03:00 AM

congrats on your 5th place win in the contest with this steamy number

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2011 6:26:00 PM

Nice visual, Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 5:09:00 PM

very sultry lines Caryl.. am sure Francine will count as one of her winners luv.. u got my vote on sexy senryu .. good luck..

Renee Kelly

Date: 6/26/2011 3:35:00 PM

Beautiful! Good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2011 2:52:00 PM

This is very nice. It's very geared for the way the woman feels. Which for me is really great. (I tried making mine like what a man likes. haha) Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2011 1:26:00 PM

Wow! Very, very sensual, Caryl. Need a cold shower now and will send you the bill. LOL I can't write well of passion, but you this is certainly worthy of a high place in Francine's contest. Thanks for stopping by. My time here is limited by dr.'s orders to stay off the computer, but I'm so glad I saw this senryu. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/26/2011 11:41:00 AM

omg Caryl this should blow others right out of water with such passion outstanding entry for contest I too did one but not as sultry as thi thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my poem for rambling poets contest best of luck to you my friend