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Love Notes In a Bottle

Love Notes in a Bottle

It came as a last meandering thought
How could I know?
Maybe a thousand years from now
On a far away shore
Would exist a lady of mystical lore
Reciting sonnets of medieval tales
In magic forests, dreaming of love
As I love
Who could feel a bond so delicate as a doves feathers
A pain so strong, like a tiger wronged
That to part would mean emotional low tides to come

That she could feel the loneliness of night
The scent of the morning dew
The feeling of rain upon ones breast
The smell of the rose
The view of the meadows
The Laughter as the children danced
The plea of one whose heart bleeds
The desires to capture love and yet remain free

Her eyes would show her ageless beauty
Her smile would hide her thoughts
Wrapped deep
Inside of old love letters

She would sigh
As I recited old prose
We would hand in hand repose
Knowing growing old is how it goes

Alas she is but an image in my mind
A thousand years till birth
Or even more
A fantasy, that lets me die in peace
That someone could love as I loved thee

You were my past, and my eternity
Lovers who never took flight
Broken wings, and broken borders
Boundaries never crossed
Kisses though we never lost

On every wind swept shore
I wander with the birds scouting overhead
As wave upon wave of desolation slaps my head
A woman is over there by the sea
She but a stranger in the mist
So not at all is she thee

A thousand years from now
On wind swept shore
Will she be forlorn?
Weeping for the likes of me
Whispering inside, he was here but a thousand years ago
Love letters telling loves desires
Inside a bottle and buried in sand

Alas is the ocean not made of ancient tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Corbin Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 8:23 PM
This was magical. Loved reading it! Xo
Bankson Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 5:18 AM
I would like to say that I couldn't have said it better but that would be a lie.Beautiful piece..Jai
Wigley Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Beautifully written, Arthur, a lovely piece. If I were you, I'd be sorely tempted to print it off and put it in a bottle and dispatch it on the tide. Poetry in motion.... Regards, Viv
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:23 PM
I like that!!!! Might even get a date 1000 years from now! :)
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Absolutely stunning Arthur - you need to get these amazing poems into a book!:-) hugs Jan xx7
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Good idea Jan!!!! Hugs
Tomlin Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Stunning vision so well portrayed. Reading this I was lost in visions of an older time of love felt by another in a different time but reflecting all those feelings i have had too.
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Thank you very much Steve!
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 5:16 PM
alright!.. you had me drooling, arthur; a real grand show this is.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Oh la la thank you nette!!! hugs!
Murray Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Next shower, I'm out there, exposing my breast. See what your poems do to me Arthur?
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 4:55 PM
Put your 'tuts' away Jean lol:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:16 PM
LOL oh la la Jean!!!!! Us Scots are like that!!!!
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:56 AM
What an amazing piece Arthur. Love how you brought all the elements together, love and death, future and past.
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Thanks Tim!
Chircop Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Ah, So so beautiful, so unique is your style when you write...A thousand years from now, someone will be reading your poetry, and thinking of what you have just written now..A fave Arthur.
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:15 PM
We can only hope! :) thanks Char
Roberts Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 12:05 AM
beautiful words my friend.....Seren
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Thank you my friend.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:40 PM
You are remarkable, Arthur, love reading
Vaso Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:14 PM
You are so kind Eve! Thank you
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