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“Keep yourselves in the love of God, looking for the mercy of our Lord Jesus Christ unto eternal life." (Jude 1:21 of the King James Bible)
Lovers’ wedding midst virtual upheaval!!! Confirmed fake news --- yet verily viral surpassing its rival, truth that’s vital though surely dismissed as vainly trivial rumor is still sought for its grand arrival… Thank God for love-propelled spiritual revival through Scriptures’ assertion yon earthly survival. Love-sick toward marital directive!!! Great news of impact--- negative from fatal infection, not positive midst pink of health, surely affirmative vanquishing fears, terribly obstructive… Praise God; His compassionate grace is effective Combatting sin-virus, grievously destructive. Love’s bliss smites hatred-pain that’s traumatic!!! Good news… awesome, but defied by skeptic “Respect our perspective...” says a critic Smiley greetings offend pessimistic Oh, thumbs up signs cheer the optimistic… Thank God for His love-poured blessings so fantastic faith-claimed by every dogmatic or pragmatic. Love life’s firmness starts from crush altitude!!! Trending news lacking factual fortitude Soon are media jokes midst fine rectitude While miracle stories of gratitude Stay flickering in silent solitude… Praise God for His boundless mercy’s infinitude Timeless for sharing love-care’s boundless magnitude.
(My attempt of Grook-series with five lines per stanza and two-line commentaries in bold.) March 1, 2022 2nd place, "G - Give me a new poem- any form" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 3/25/2022.

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Date: 3/14/2022 3:44:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/4/2022 1:28:00 AM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my Give Me A New Poem Contest with your wonderful poem, I like the bible verse quote too ~Constance
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Date: 3/2/2022 12:57:00 PM
Your amazing poems shine so brilliantly in the faith of our Lord, and your poetry amazes me so much. God bless you sweet Beata <3 ~BJ
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Date: 3/1/2022 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful monorhymes Beata! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you!
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Date: 3/1/2022 3:36:00 PM
Excellent work, Beata. your summary statements were uplifting. Let your heart speak, they're always some that will need the message you've been given. Smiles ~ Blessing, Bill
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Date: 3/1/2022 1:24:00 PM
Though difficult to decipher your love of the Lord shines through it all! <3
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