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Love Missed While Waiting

Westward blown… sprinkled mist of wind’s wisp bathed in summer’s blazing heat upon iron frame bench I sit my legs they dangle above madness, sandy ledge, not a cloud shield me from sun’s bake baking my starving arms… hunger’s thrum I wait here for love to come my eyes they roam the torrent angry sea splash of wave’s cast swab my face amid gentle breeze so consumed with the wind’s mist, the sun’s bake, the sea’s splash, my hunger’s sass I missed the love that walked pass daydreaming… what a drag!

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Date: 5/27/2018 10:59:00 AM
Sweet. Congrats on your podium finish, David.
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Date: 5/24/2018 12:55:00 PM
Wow.........I could visualize this moment, ...as if watching it unfold! Well done, David !! Congrats on your high placement !!
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Date: 5/24/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank for reading and commenting, Carrie
Date: 5/24/2018 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever poem. Well done.
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David Maxoptimism
Date: 5/24/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thanks kindly, Susan
Date: 5/24/2018 7:56:00 AM
Very cute and clever.
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Date: 5/24/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thanks, Dale
Date: 5/24/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thought-provoking, WINNING poem, David. CONGRATS! Janice
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David Maxoptimism
Date: 5/24/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thank u, Janice

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