Eric Boddie Poet Rhyme

Love Might Be a Risk -- the Andaree

"Love Might Be a Risk"

If you listen, you will definitely learn
If you ignite it, you just might burn
Can I Love you good this night
Did you muse this write
I don't know
Might
Really slow
The progress in sight
Whether deserved or with spite
Either way we must be very stern
Otherwise, Love will never offer our turn

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Skat A October 21, 2015 at 9:36 PM Eric, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

Constance La France October 21, 2015 at 1:32 PM Eric, oh love is like a roll of the dice you never know if you will win. I like this 7 and thanks for visiting my autumn poem, it is my favorite time of the year too~

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2015 at 9:10 PM Thanks for supporting my contest. I enjoyed the read.

Robert Lindley October 17, 2015 at 7:46 AM My friend, love is most often a risk if it is with a new found person. Yet the possible fruits to harvest almost always are worth the gamble. I find your form, flow, rhyme and depth in this poem are all fine. Solid 7 and god luck in that contest. A7 Eric Boddie October 17, 2015 at 10:26 AM thank you Robert....and Love is the only risk that is TRULY worth taking....

Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2015 at 10:24 PM E.R.I.C. B.O.D.D.I.E. love is a risky business. Nice and different form. Nice to see you give this a go. Wuv LINDA Eric Boddie October 13, 2015 at 3:56 PM thank you pd....as possibly your biggest fan that means a lot....;)

Kp Nunez October 10, 2015 at 6:00 PM Nice rhyme, Eric. IS this for the contest? I thought it should have same 1st and last lines? Not sure, maybe you can check it...I haven't tried it yet myself...hugs! Eric Boddie October 13, 2015 at 3:55 PM you should try it kim....your words are always compelling....and glad you liked it....;)

Anita Sharma October 9, 2015 at 4:18 PM lovely description eric..liked it Eric Boddie October 13, 2015 at 3:52 PM thank you anita....this was a cool idea that I really enjoyed....;)

James Inman October 7, 2015 at 3:14 PM Eric very nice. Great form and great message. Eric Boddie October 13, 2015 at 3:51 PM thanks james....the form is strongly inspiring