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Love Me Like You Mean It

Love me like you mean it without pretending smile don't need a stroke of genius or conversation style your presence is required, the telephones a rue don't need you constantly but never just won't do love me like you mean it without pretending smile Love me like you care enough to give the very best believe in what I say and never put me to the test I'm always here, slow to anger quick in every turn so share it now while I'm alive, no ashes in the urn love me like you mean it without pretending smile Love me like you mean it come raise me off the floor relationships aren't easy, you can't buy one at the store so here is your VIP, message me a signal see to see all is good when we're together drinking Red Rose tea love me like you mean it, without pretending smile... December 6, 2019 Contest Name: Love Me Like You Mean It Sponsor Name: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 1/20/2020 1:38:00 PM
Pixie, beautiful verse, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/1/2020 11:13:00 PM
Wonderful rendering.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 12/10/2019 3:44:00 PM
Powerful feeling in this piece; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/6/2019 11:39:00 PM
This reads like a winner to me from beginning to end and back. Excellent form, wonderful style. You have a nice way with the imagery... even stanza.. I can not do that.. but working on it.. you are great at it. Ann
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Date: 12/6/2019 7:24:00 PM
Tea for two - I used to look forward to that. Nice verse here - good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/6/2019 4:18:00 PM
Some good thoughts in great lines; well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/6/2019 1:15:00 PM
Well written Pixie. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
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Date: 12/6/2019 7:57:00 AM
Very nice Pixie! I like that, without 'pretending' to smile :)
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Date: 12/6/2019 7:13:00 AM
Really nicely done my friend. So much said in the beautiful poem. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 12/6/2019 7:00:00 AM
"you can't buy one at the store " - what a great poem. Loved this line!
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Date: 12/6/2019 6:31:00 AM
Wow Pixie. Powerful. Superbly penned. A FAVE for me! The form and few repeated lines drive the point home. Great message.
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